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Reviews for Moonlight Sessions

By : MissB
  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on June 24, 2005
    Ah! VERY nice! This was well worth the wait. Very sexy and yet still very sweet. Hehehehe. I liked it muchlies and you did well with the use of protection. It worked here nicely. I certainly can't wait to read more fics from you, so keep up the writing!! I'll be waiting! ;)
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  • From Aubs on June 22, 2005
    Heh, sorry to double post. I just forgot to mention your question on protection. I agree with everyone else that protection is an important element to any story that relates sexual acts. But to be perfectly honest I'm not sure if the topic can be appropriately added to the FMA world without it being awkward. If you feel you can address it comfortably in your story than PLEASE be sure and do so. If not the call is up to you. Since the setting for FMA, though not historical, is definately not a modern-day one you can probably get away with either one.
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  • From Aubs on June 22, 2005
    Yes! A rarely found (but greatly treasured) m/f fic, and well written on top of it! I almost wept =) Anyways, I like the way you are tying these chapters together. Even though they deal predominately with the "lovin'" aspect of the relationship the story as a whole does not come across shallow. I am also THRILLED to read that not only are you continuing with this fic, you already have ideas in the works for others! I will definately be checking in for those additions. Thanks for the read.
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  • From ANON - Romance grl! on June 22, 2005
    This is really good so far ur doing a fantastic job!!!^_^ ummm could u email me when u have the next chapter in??
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2005
    df
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  • From ANON - HealerAriel on June 20, 2005
    You know, you could easily fit protection into the storyline. I mean, they're both inexperienced, so it would add to the cute and nervous bit to have them fumbling with the proper administration of such things. It always strikes me as odd that in most common-era romance novels, nobody uses a condom - ever! (Well, Lori Handeland's books are the exception, and I find that very cool.)

    Anyways... Whether you do or don't want to write it in, it makes no difference, as we all love a good smut scene. But I actually think you could make the use of protection very cute with them, if you play your cards right. Just food for thought. I'll love it, either way.
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  • From ANON - HealerAriel on June 20, 2005
    Ooooooooooooohhh, so sexy. No other word seems to fit.
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 19, 2005
    Hey, if you still want advice about the preotection thing, then here's my opinion.
    I think that fanfictions are great because you don't have to put stuff like protection in it. To add it to the story would really kill the mood, and I just don't get the same feeling from it if it did have protection. Plus, if Ed & Winry are virgins, then they shouldn't need it. If it's about Winry getting pregnant, then just say she took birth-control pills or something.

    That's my opinion...
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 19, 2005
    Wonderful story! I love the plot, and I can't wait to see what happens next^_^
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  • From ANON - Rollan Bones on June 15, 2005
    I want 2 express just how "sexually-adorable" your short stories r......Ya know I could never understand why: Winry & Edward aren't showcased much more often in fan-fics.....U truly stuck 2 the essence of the Characters' persona. That, my friend, is a REAL achievement. Just like Ed & Win there's no sappy love confession sex..it's give & take without surrender but with deep gratification.....Just as I thrilled in privately "sensually-connecting" the climactic couple of Orphen & Cleao with no fluff but true emotion..U have brought me 2 Ed & Win in their intense yet close connection...There's no greater turn-off than a fic that sounds nothing like couple who's engaged in it.
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  • From drake220 on June 15, 2005
    hey! great story! loved the ending of this chapter. as for the protection issue, there are three ways to go about doing it: one, you could just have it slipped on like no big deal as it IS important to have protection mentioned. Two, you could write a disclaimer stating that, yeah you know they should be using protection adn in real life they would but as this is a story and in no way real, they're not b/c it'd break up the flow. Follow that with a capped BUT IF YOU ARE HAVING SEX, USE PROTECTION. Thirdly, (and this is my favorite)- have winry use her mouth to put it on. It'd be using protection and stay in the groove of the story. Trust me on this one, if you've got a guy who hates wearing a condom, suggest this method and i garuntee that he won't complain. Plus, you can just use a hand job to make sure the wrappers on tight.
    personally, any of these methods work for me. hope it helps!!
    great story with excellent writing and sexy situations. love it!
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on June 15, 2005
    Ah, finally. They unit. Hehehe. I liked the opening sentence the most. It was just perfect. But go Ed! Still an awesome Ed/Win smut story and I'm loving every chapter! Don't stop writing and I can't wait for another update!! :)
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  • From Asidian on June 15, 2005
    First of all... I like. Good writing, interesting scenario, very hot. Much fond of the title, as well. ^_^

    *considers the question* And y'know... actually, if I were you, I wouldn't think about whether a lack of protection was -distracting- so much as... plausibly, would Ed and Winry -have- any? I mean... they're in -Rizenbul-; where are they supposed to buy anything? They hadn't been -planning- on having sex, so short of him transmuting something... I don't know how you could handle that. ^^
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  • From ANON - ChipperOwns on June 15, 2005
    All i can say is....Great job and keep writing (quickly).
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  • From ANON - A.J. on June 14, 2005
    What a great story! I love Ed/Winry pairings and this fanfic edge to it that nice to read. As far as protection is concerned I really don't think it's necessary in a fanfic. I do agree that protection is very important but fanfics are pure fantasy so writing in a contraceptive may distrub the flow of the story. I guess it all depends on how gracefully it's written in. Either way you're doing a great job and I look forward to may more chappies!!!
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