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By : MissB
  • From ANON - Kiki Ortega on June 24, 2005
    It was very well-written. You wrote this expertly... it had me thinking you had either experience with this situation or a degree in psychology... but you answered all my questions in your AN @ the end. AGAIN, very well done.
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 23, 2005
    A very nice story. I like how that even though Ed was 'fake' raping Winry, she still did it to comfort him, which is usually something the man does for the woman so I like how it was flipped.
    I love both of your stories^^
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  • From ANON - PinkStarz on June 22, 2005
    I liked this a lot, personally. I find that Edward's way of coping with the rape seemed quite realistic, alongside Winry's willingness to help him.

    Great job.
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  • From drake220 on June 21, 2005
    This fic is wonderful. It's odd but very interesting to see how the recreation of the act was slowly healing Ed. Winry's character was so on point and canon: there to help, knowing her boundry and Ed's but pushing past them anyways. great job.
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  • From ANON - A.J. on June 19, 2005
    I think you did a great job with this fanfic. I think that you properly expressed all of the emotions and frustrations that would come with kind of invasive, unwanted act. Bravo on giving this story a very real and personal feel.
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  • From ANON - Lemon on June 19, 2005
    Once again. yuo're fics touch on the reality of humanity. This is one of the best rape fics I have read where the act and healing process is seemingly real. Most rape fics don't convey that recovering from an attack, whether male or female, takes time. Although it was only two chapters long, your fic manages to show the passage of time it takes for Ed to heal. Or at least begin the road to recovery.
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  • From ANON - sterlingwings900 on June 19, 2005
    it was good, though extremely short. i wouldnt be too worried about it being rape, ed is just frustrated and needed some comforting. he wants someone to need him and assuming winry cares for him a lot (which she does...) he had sex with her! not a problem there!
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  • From drake220 on June 19, 2005
    oh my god, you are freakin' telepathic!!! i am in middle of writing something like this!!!! weird!!!!!!!!!!!! this was well done. DAMN well done!!! i am so impressed, i cannot even tell you! psychological and gripping, it was short but so potent! god, it KICKED ASS!! to make such an impact with so little takes a lot of talent- you are a great writer from this piece alone!
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  • From ANON - littlechrno on June 18, 2005
    You will try to close this one wont you? I mean as I read it I wondered if maybe there was something deeper Ed needed from Winry. Something he wasn't will to ask for. Details girl..please...

    (coughs)

    I was wondering (since I love you smut effect on Ed and Winry) if you have ever tried a challenge? I host a site that post challenges weekly for full metal alchemist. My thoughts however usually run amoug the smut type however I never get a smuty response...

    anyways if you would like to check it out its at

    http://p097.ezboard.com/bequivalentexchange
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  • From ANON - Rollan Bones on June 18, 2005
    Wow...........Though I figured that Ed & Win could basically take from 1 another agreesively, deeply.,,,I can finally see Edward as the firm, lonely, needy agressor.....Hmmmmm.........i must say U indeed made me think of the their sexual communication in less playful but more serious fashion. thanx 4 a new way 2 replay their love-making in my filthy lil mind!
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  • From ANON - Lurky on June 18, 2005
    Honestly i liked it, i mean sure it was rape but it wasnt really forcefull or unpleasant. Winry under stoond n all, anywyas really likes it juts wnated to priase. i dont normally review, feel special! hah ^.^
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  • From Mikeal on June 17, 2005
    This was really good. I took psycology in school so I totally understand it. You did a wonderful job on it. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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