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By : chayron
  • From ANON - oneversustwo on July 13, 2006
    First I want to say this story has kept entertained for many long and pleasurable hours! I'm sorry I didn't review before, I'm usually lazy, but your story deserves every comment.
    Your characterization is incredible, very convincing and interesting. This fic is fun, loving, exciting and very very addictive! I usually stay away from mpreggie fics because they're...errr...they can be very stupid and repetitive, they try to portray the pregnant one as a woman ?_? heck, if I wanted to read about a woman I wouldn't be reading yaoi, would I? But your version made me believe that anything is possible as long as it's well written, Vegita is still...Vegita, and that's great!
    I can't wait to read more and more!
    Thanks for writing and sharing!
    Hugs

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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on July 11, 2006
    Gods!!!!
    Well, Kamala need an advice about romance with urgency. I like this chapter, except the part where Gohan didn't say the right words -men- I hope that it quickly pass... or at least Goku won't get mad for the Gohan's scent in Veggie u_u

    How long is going to take for the baby borns?

    Keep writing, you know you're right n_n
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 11, 2006
    one word wow
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  • From ANON - jennifer gibson on June 29, 2006
    this is a great story. i read the prevoius story to this one and this continuation is wonderful. i hope that the birth comes really soon!!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 24, 2006
    oohhh that was funny... goku was like so slow to catch the porn and i always knew trunks and goten were togerther.
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on June 24, 2006
    Hiya!!!

    So beautiful!!! Goku wishing for Veggie is gorgeous and cute. Gohan is going to mate with Kamala? or is my imagination? One thing that I like about your fic is Goku with his innocent mind of his n_n

    Updated soon, you know you're right!!! :P
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  • From ANON - Angeleus on June 24, 2006
    Hey, long time no see. Sorry i havent been in contact, lots been going on over here. For a while i didnt have internet access. I like this chapter, it gave me a much needed laugh... gohan and porno, lol. And trunks and gohan, lovely. Why dont you send me an email if you have the chance?
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  • From ANON - bob on June 23, 2006
    I love how naive Goku is, it's so funny! Update soon please I must read the rest!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on June 19, 2006
    i just started reading fanfics again and i finally got around to reviewing this and it's still as great as it was when i first started reading it please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Chrys on June 18, 2006
    *cackles insanly* I wont tell anyone if you wont tell *nudge nudge wink wink* I do the same thing sometimes. Specially when I find a really good story I tend to skip to the good parts of them LOL..

    Another awsome chapter ^_^ I really liked the gunman and vegeta scene bwahaha

    Ja ne,
    Chrys
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on June 17, 2006
    Hiya!!

    n_n

    Yeah, I'm agreed with you about this chapter. Je je, I was imagining Goku's child flying in that funny cloud. I can`t wait to see the newborn and Vegeta reaction XD

    Keep writing 'cause I want more!!!

    :P
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 17, 2006
    love the chapter it has a very soft feel to it
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  • From Auroawinter on June 16, 2006
    Bwahaha, great chappie.. Loved the whole tramatized krillin thing bwahaha to funny

    Yeah I can understand the whole wanna wag my mouth thing. I write a naruto fanfic and Im soo tempted to answer my reviewers with what they want.. but then it would ruin all my fun.. hehe I like the idea of keeping them guessing ^_^ anyway keep up the great work and look forward to the next chappie

    JA Ne,
    Chrys

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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on June 07, 2006
    n_n

    What can I say?

    Write more!!
    More!!
    More!!

    I love this story...
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 06, 2006
    poor poor krillen seeing his best friend getting fucked on top of a table
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