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Reviews for The Sexual Adventures of Edward and Winry

By : MissB
  • From on October 09, 2006
    o.O.... Holy shit, that was just hot all around! I-- just, wow. ::laughs:: That's really all I can say at the moment. ^^ :) (:
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  • From ANON - Marlemon on January 18, 2006
    I think you have a really good way with words. The one thing I would advise is to take your time a little more. Developed the tension a bit and then release it. What you did was by no means bad, but a little more would have been delicious. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    BRAVO,BRAVO,i loved but it was a tad short and don't you think after her orgasm she would be mad because she could get pregnet

    ED=^_^

    WINRY=>_
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  • From ANON - fmafan on October 28, 2005
    ha ha hah, i love it. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Alyson Metallium on October 10, 2005
    Oooo, pro's and con's, huh?? Hmm.

    Well, I usually turn tail and run from a lemon if the "C" word is used to describe a woman. to me, that's one of the most distasteful words. I've also noticed that a lot of stories pay attention to the main errogenous zones, (breasts, groin) but don't say anything about other sensative areas, like the inner elbow, the ears, the palms of the hands.

    Hmm. ^^;;
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  • From ANON - anonymous*sp?* on August 14, 2005
    i like a bit of comedy, but not like laugh out loud comedy. i also like it when people take it slowly not tear off the others clothes in a race to see who can get nide first. i think that just a little too fast paced it makes the seen last lnonger if you take things a step at a time.
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  • From EatNYu on August 02, 2005
    Oh yeah... Turn offs: Yaoi...(sorry people), and the cliche sex talk
    Turns ons: A bit of nibblin' on either side and dominant women. NOT DOMINATRIXES!!!!! But women who like to take the lead...ya know?


    Thomas Alex C.
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  • From EatNYu on August 02, 2005
    YOU WILL WRITE MORE FMA WITH WINRY/ED OR AS MY MANE SAYS, I WILL FREAKIN' EAT YOU! I liked it. More?
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  • From ANON - dojomistressachan on July 27, 2005
    get their kink on eh? I don't know if this is playing off an idea or not but I have a damn good doujin where they get it going in an alley in the middle of the day in central against a wall, I don't know why but the against the wall thing is damn hot. And I mean anywhere. But attention and description of some of the body parts, breasts, vagina, penis, are usually really good. Like saying that he was playing with a nipple and how it hardened. Or getting descriptive with noises, like the sound of their bodies as they met again and again with a smacking sound from their two sweaty bodies. Nice desriptions like that. I feel like a perv now but I do know what I like =^^= Oh and something really fun I've seen in like 2 hentai games but never read and was a bit hot was this bit of foreplay where a guy actualy rubs his penis against her clit and vagina but doesn't go in, she has to be really wet but I heard it's stimulating as hell. I have limited patience for foreplay so sorry i don't know for sure. Anyway there's a few ideas, enjoy.
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  • From ANON - Fuu-Chan on July 20, 2005
    this was fun! and i understand what you mean, when it comes to writing sexual topics.. i actually think you're doing a wonderful job so keep it up, and what about that theater, eh?
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  • From ANON - P.C. on July 16, 2005
    Hiyas! I just wanted to make another sugestion. I'm into the whole 'female dominance' thing, so how about some kind of Ed bondage thing?X3 That would be hott!! Oooo, Ed all tied up and stuff...with Winry to do what she wants with him...that turns me on:D And then you could do the opposite with Winry being the one in bondage!o^-^o
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  • From ANON - sterlingwings900 on July 14, 2005
    OO! Hell ya! This was good! Okay....about the survey...hmm...well, nothing turns me off exactly. OO, I know one, I hate obscure name for male/female genitals. Once I came upon this horrible "lemon" and they used words like "birdie" for the penis. That just totally killed it. Another thing, it’s one thing if you put a song before or AFTER the lemon, but DONT put it in the middle of the sex scene! MAJOR MOMENT KILLER!

    Okay, now for what I like! Rough treatment to the lips is awesome, I love kissing scenes or anything to do with lips so yeah, put those lips to use! Oo, I agree with many others. A dominatrix Ed is major hotness and with him being rough like that....GOSH I ENVY WINRY! I like it when it’s rough but also when the guy is still concerned for the girl's pleasure. You should make them try different positions: 69, anal, oral....all that dirty stuff ;p. And now dirty talk....here’s one example I like: "Would you like me on top?" "Of course....I want to see them bounce." Ooohh yeah, that’s what I like, whispers of encouragement or yelling out in ecstasy.

    You wanted an obscure place right? IF ONLY PLANES EXISTED IN THE SERIES! I woulda said a bathroom in a plane. Damn, okay how about along a river bank or IN a river/lake. Or to sum it all up, sex in the water: bath tub, pool, lake, river, OCEAN! Whatever, just sex anywhere!

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  • From ANON - Chibi Usa on July 07, 2005
    EDWIN FOREVER!

    I'd like to see Winry make Ed 'feel better' after being hurt, Nurse Winry anyone?
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  • From ANON - First Lady Lestat on July 07, 2005
    Finally, someone who supports het parings in FMA! I love EdWin stories, the bestfriends to more is a guilty pleasure of mine. First off Loved the fic. I have been on a mad hunt for EdWin fics and you are one of my fav authors (also one of the few) to write decent EW stories, and for that you deserve a pat on the back.

    Something I hate in fanfics are songs, a few lines to a song is ok, but when people want to write out the full song and do that every chapter I tend to stop reading. Also it's really annoying when the author breaks the story for their own little commentary that really has nothing to do with the fic. Another thing I hate is the childish attempts at cliffhangers

    e.g. And as she ran through the dark terrifying forest she collided with none other than..... HA HA HA don't you just love that! God I really truly hate that.

    Something that I think would be interesting to read in 'The Sexual Adventures of Edward and Winry ' is a dominate Ed. We all know Ed is a take charge guy, and I don't see why he wouldn't at least attempt to get dominate/rough in the bedroom. Another thing I can really see, is Ed and Winry engaging in some dirty tal (wink wink)

    Once again great fic, and can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 07, 2005
    in public?!?!? WHEEE!!! i'm on this boat and you will not get me off for love or money! (maybe for a sexy, rich and stupid man who wants to tie the knot- but nothing else.) what phrases turn me off: 'big boy', 'baby' and 'whose your daddy??'. bleah!! creepy and trite. also, describing the penis as 'man meat' or 'sixteen inch cock!!!!' (does not exist. urban myth of idiot birth) are all really gross. I guess I like a more lyrical phrasing of limbs. in certain places, 'wood' is okay but only in certain contexts. Words for female genetalia are very tricky in my opinion. stuff like 'pussy', 'cunt' or 'sopping wet hole' just really don't do it for me. It all depends on whether a word fits into context: for example, if in this story ed yelled out something like "ooooh, yeah baby! What a cunt!! dripping wet pussy!!!"- please. spare me.
    however, i adore dirty language during sex. i think it's just the right amount of kinkiness. it just has to be tastefully dirty. this story was extremely tastefully dirty and i ADORED it. fabulous job on this! the descriptions, the talking, the actions and just about everything was damn perfect.
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