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Reviews for Once A Thief

By : Kali
  • From ANON - kik on July 28, 2007
    BRILLIANT!!!!!

    I've completely fallen in love with your TyKa!

    Please, please, please update soon, I don't think my nerves can bear to wait too long to find out how Taka copes.

    Huge hugs for writing and sharing this beautiful piece of fiction!

    Hope to see loads more TyKa from you for a long time to come.

    Hugs,
    kik
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 19, 2007
    o_O!!!!!!! There is one thing that makes me tick.....................it's your EVIL CLIFFIES!!!!!!!! grrr *growls dangerously* But other then that, this chapter kept me on the edge of my seat, litterally.

    I loved that security system Takao had, very unique....................and we still do not know whe Gideon now actually is!

    You had better not let Takao-kun DIE!!! o_O, i won't be able to cope with that, im serious here!!!!
    Damn you and your twists, but that's also what i like most about your fics, you always have an element of surprise in them!!

    Watching out for the next chap! DUN FORGET TO EMAIL ME PLS PLS PLS!!

    Jen
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 19, 2007
    Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay i finished reading chapter 17!!!1 What a hot and marvelous chapter it was, I know i commented over MSN several times but i just gotta say it again! I love your dialogue, it's smooth funny foul and yet seriously tantalizing! I'm a sucker for good Dialogue as I have told you. Ofcourse the fact that Kai was UKE was a biiiig plus for me mwuahaha, you know how i obsess over UKE!kai! *slaps Kai for slapping Takao on the plane*

    You wrote a HET lemon!!!! And it was good! Not too mushy just right^^. the way you had hiromi kind of insecure about stuff was really endearing aswell as Tala's softness! *squeels*. That lemon was very sweet and very lovely, you should write more HET lemons in the future! Also the Safe Smex thingie was real awesome!!! You know what I think about that!

    So now the confrontation is near, I was spooked reading how Takao held Kai at a distant with elctric shocks to prove he could care for himself. I feel for Takao-kun cuz he has been through alot and it ain't over yet XD

    I'm gunna read chapter 18 now, see you in the next review!!

    Jen
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  • From ANON - Lady Kirei on July 19, 2007
    Wow. That is all I have to say. The last two chapters were really, really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. I don't think that Takao is dying, but he's just really exhausted from all the energy he had to use and he fall unconcious. I hope that Rei will come back into the story at some point before the end. I would like to know how he would react if he was told what was happening with Takao. See ya later.

    Lady Kirei ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ranma on June 02, 2007
    HO SHIT... OMG TYKA LEMOOOOONNNN!!!!!! damn I haven't read something that hot in a LOOONG time, heheh I think since the last time you updated ^_^!!! Hahaha lol... omg o.o... Hilary and Tala... I don't think it'll ever beat Hil/Max for me, but that just NEEDED to happen. But now... I totally want more Kenny and Max, I miss them!!
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  • From ANON - K.C on June 01, 2007
    OMG OMG IS IT THAT BULLY GUY FROM THE 1st STORY!?!??!?!?!??! Just guessing since he got busted because of them? I love this story and you are probably one of the best writers in Beyblade you really get the characters down and I love all the ideas you come up with! glad U updated hope for more soon bye
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  • From TakaoKai on April 16, 2007
    Hey!
    Must say that this is really good
    and exciting *smiles*

    Please update :D

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  • From CrazyJen on February 22, 2007
    @_@ YEASH!!! i finished rereading ALL of OAT! Oh damn dude so many letters! *passes out*
    *CJ* Get ya act in gear and leave a proper review, you owe Kali that for neglecting and non reviewing this excellent piece of writing! *Twacks Jen over the head*

    @_@ uurghhh Who turned the lights off!! ANYWAY! my evil lil yami *Eyes her and her Katana sword warily*, is right! I should be ashamed of myself for letting this gorgous fic slip out under my attention, no matter how busy i may have been because its so frigging awesome! Omg okay where to start.........

    I'll start rite back from the beginning, the way you had those little sweet tyka moments woven into the angsty plot was so marvelous. It sure had me on the edge of my seat, both twitching in agony and squeeling like a brainless lil something! XD . Anyways the plotline in this story is really well worked out and the way you combine angst, suspense and romance all into one smooth piece of writing still amazes me!

    OMG and now i just finished the latest chapter, i swear i was biting my nails throughout that part where they were sneaking around stealing that Egg. It worked out right?? O_O

    I love the TalaXHillary in this. I love the way you have Tala all flirty and brisk XD. So cool and the fact that you make Hillary kind of an pc expert with some mad skillz picked up from Kenny heh he and such thrills me. It's good that that girl gets some good attention in fics dude! Then ofcourse the TYKA is heavenly as always! I love their little moments, all of them and i just know that you will have that first part of the next chap containing a luscious lovely lemon ne??

    *CJ* My my stupid Jen, you are such a perv!
    *Jen* You ain't nothing better stupid yami! Don't think i didnt see those YAOI anime's dvd's under your bed!
    *CJ* "....", i'll shut up now!

    Anyways........................I WANT TO READ THE NEXT PART!!!.

    Also wow heh heh Kai's father is really pry-ish, isnt he for investigating Takao's past like that. BAD Susume! *hits him*
    *Susume* @_@.............what just hit me???O_O

    *grins* So Kali-sama, there you have it, i took a genrous chunk of space out of this review box heh heh, but it's worth every letter. You had better keep writing sistah-friend, because you are my biggest inspiration ! Whenever i read a fic by you, it gets me in writing gear! My my...XD I have almost finished typing up the next installment of The Forbidden, i'll let you know when i upload okay?
    And now i am off for some well deserved tea and then sleep! XD its 4 27 am already!!?!! O_O

    Bye bye!
    *huggles*
    Jen
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  • From ANON - Seto's Darkness on October 08, 2006
    Hello! :) I've been following this fic for a while--though I usually forget to review *sweatdrop* It's a very nice fanfiction, though of course, I could be biased because it's TyKa =P There are some minor spelling errors, but nothing too serious ^.^ I hope you'd be able to provide us TyKa fans with more of this lovely fic!

    Hahahaha, though I'm still pouty from Hiro/Hitoshi being captured >.<

    Keep up the good work! :) The TyKa fandom is slowly 'dying' and I hope that the remaining authors and authoresses would keep on writing! :) *is hit with a wave of guilt for not writing lots of TyKa* Anyhow. Till next time! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Lisa on September 09, 2006
    Wow. I mean...no, I meant wow. I've read almost all of your stories over the last year and yet I still can't get over what a fantastic writer you are. Not only are your interpretations of the characters brilliant, but the plotlines you keep coming up with are logical, well written and...wow. I hope you keep writing. It work like yours that keeps me reading fanfiction.
    By the way, Kai and Takao are such a hot couple! Thank god you seem to think so too!
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  • From ANON - Talia on August 23, 2006
    I still like it and it's so cute that takao met the mom... but I hope nothing hapens to his real family. I also hope that his condition doesn't get worse
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  • From aura1234 on July 18, 2006
    keep up the good work this is an interesting fic
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2006
    gg
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  • From ANON - Tyson on July 18, 2006
    Wow it's getting even more interesting lol, Great chapter!~ Plez try to update soon!
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  • From ANON - noelle on June 18, 2006
    I can't believe I missed this update ... oh my goodness ... I must say some of it was decidedly too hot for my eyes, but I loved that you got them blissed out regardless. :o)

    They're just too perfect. TyKa, your TyKa so totally rule!!!

    Thank you for sharing, chum.

    I anxiously await your next chap.

    Hugs,
    noe
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