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Reviews for To admit the truth

By : Okamikun
  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2005
    you stop here you ass damn you keep writing update, update,l update
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  • From ANON - Au on November 05, 2005
    Wow! I wont more.
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  • From ANON - Gera Lain on August 22, 2005
    Sounds interesting. Continue please!
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  • From ANON - Hellakitty on August 13, 2005
    interesting ;oo
    there's still some grammar that needs to be checked and yadayadayada. And after every 3 or 5 sentences(or less than so), create a new paragraph, please :) It enables a person to take break in between reading! :D
    Press enter after every paragraph too, that makes a story much neater!
    And yes-- it's always good to stop when you feel the need to take a break- like your hands cramping~~

    Peace out, yo. =^__^=
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 08, 2005
    ooh ya and what your other reviewer said...humor is SSSOOOO GOOD for a story and Im soo loving your humor so do not stop that k?? I can live with out the sex, but soo loving the humor...ok ok cant I have both?? sex and humor??? *pouts* huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 08, 2005
    yay you update!...lmaoo ooh Im sooo loving this..it has me laughing and going omgggg...and what is Ed doing going back?? hmmm it is lust..hehe and not the one trying to kill him either..lol I loved that part was too funny..anyhow there was no sex, but thats all good for now...love the mind dialogue going on, too good, and I know your working your way to a sex scene, hmmm wondering if it will be the next one??? one can hope hehe..but I do love plot with my sex scene so this is good, and I cant wait for more, update soon k?? ty ty ty much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Juna on August 08, 2005
    Awwww, they got inturupted. Nuts! XD anyways I cannot wit to see what will happen keep it up.
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  • From on August 08, 2005
    WHAT?!? NO LEMON?!? Lol, oh well it's a good, and freakin hilarious story anyway. I really like it so please update again soon, and make sure you keep the humor because humor is part of what makes a story F*ING AWESOME!!! ^_^
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  • From on August 03, 2005
    OMG I love your story. I love it when Ed said "SUCK ME YOU JERK" that is classic comedy right there. Keep up the good work, and post the lemon soon please. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kay on August 01, 2005
    One of the meanest cliffhangers ever! WRITE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2005
    Nice start. Relax, the words will come to you. Don't force them. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Mija on July 30, 2005
    omg I just soo have to read more...uh oooh Ed said Suck me off Roy..hehe intentional slip?? hmmmm I wonder...hehe would soo love to read more, hope you update soon, ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Raiko on July 29, 2005
    Hi there!
    Okay, well first off, it was toooooooooo short, BUT! I have to say that you got my attention...Hell yeah!!!
    Second, I really like your writing style...(Some authors begin with one style and end up finishing the story with another one and It pisses me off!!!*don't really know why but it just do so*) Anyway...just keep writing the way you did for the first will ya? It's really great!
    And Thirdly, as your fic is not a one-shot, I suggest that you work on some plot somehow, I mean, lemon's good but, personnaly I'm not really into 'bing-bang-sensless-fucking-oups-dead-end-the-fic's-finished' (only for one shot and it has to be like FREAKIN AWSOME!!). So in your case, it'd be fun to read more euh...'extended', seing how much I like your style...

    Well, this review is pretty much shitty and I'm sorry for that, but at least it was honest.
    I'm looking forward to read what you have in stores for us in the next chap.
    Keep on going and PPLEEEAASEEEE MAKE IT LONGER!!!!!!!!!=^_^=
    See ya
    Yurikai Kurosaki
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 29, 2005
    GASP! You continued it there!?! O_O NOOOOOOOOOO!!! Anyways hey this is already getting my thirsty attention for the action. Yes that does not make any sense. Heh but I will have to point out a few spelling errors but other then that brilliant! Write more please!!!!!
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