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Reviews for Moving On

By : Sheemashelin
  • From ANON - Zimmerie on August 03, 2005
    HAHA! I'll probably write chapter two on the weekend! ANd all those questions will be answered in the upcoming chapter! So stay tuned. And don't worry... ^_^; It'll be spell checked this time. I wasn't able to spell chack it for reasons that are annoying.... SO anyway I'll get it done! Thanks for reviewing!

    Zim
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  • From ANON - Crystal on August 03, 2005
    I like the idea a lot ^^ The story has potential, of that I can see. However, you need to try and spell check your stories or ask someone to beta for you. I caught quite a few errors. Also, I hate to tell you but 4xD is a really popular het pairing. If you go to fanfiction.net and search for a story containing Quatre and Dorothy in romance.. you'll find a lot. While its definitely breaking the more popular yaoi stereotype, its still a popular pairing.

    Heh, then again, I do read fanfics in a near-obsessive manner. I've never actually tried to calculate how popular one pairing is over another. I just notice if one tends to pop up more than another and decide what I'm in the mood for. (Usually, its the yaoi variety =3)

    I wanna see more of this story =3 You haven't mentioned much of Heero yet other than rumors of him being with Wufei. Will he be attending the event? If not, why? What's he doing? How is Wufei going to react seeing Hildie? XD How will the others react when they're told that Quatre and Dorothy are dating and being sexual together? So many questions. You have me curious!
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