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Reviews for Roy/Riza Closet Challenge

By : BeautifulBlood
  • From KumikoChan on October 24, 2006
    eeeek! i loved it! good job! arigato!
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  • From fluffy802005 on January 26, 2006
    i loved it. there aren't enough roy/riza fics damnit!!!
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  • From ANON - Dia on November 12, 2005
    Damn it all...thats me!
    That was really good...PRICELESS!
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on August 24, 2005
    lol! I loved it!

    Rock on!!!!
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  • From ANON - evil-chan on August 23, 2005
    oh my god~ that was GOOD~ it's so hard to find good roy/riza lemons out there... v.v I love you. xD

    ~evil-chan
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  • From ANON - Unknown user on August 19, 2005
    I worship you. I really do. You have done what many have not. A good fic (A little lacking in the plot but that's not a problem to me) and a tasteful lemon. No vast amounts of body fluids, no anatomy confusions or a disregard thereof. Just a good sex scene. And the way you wrote it had some purpose. It wasn't just a "Oh I'm bored, fuck me!" scenario. It has something more.
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  • From ANON - @N0nymU$ on August 13, 2005
    i have 2 say that was pretty good
    but u could have added more things happenin during their time in that closet
    and u couldve added another chapter 2 extend it
    so if u thinkin of continuin this lemon i would say
    GO FOR IT
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  • From ANON - Rin-D on August 11, 2005
    WOW! was that really your first lemon? Well i think that it was a pretty good story though i think that Riza sed "sir" too much, but i think other than that the characters seemed to all be in character. I was supriesed when i went to your author's page to find only this story is there. i would've expected you to have more stories than that well i hope that you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Nintendocat on August 10, 2005
    Yay! Thank you for doing my challenge. It was very good. I'm just happy to find good Roy/Riza fan fiction amongst all the Yaoi this site has. Other than a few spelling errors it was great. And you kept up with the characters' personalities. Once again, good job.
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