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Reviews for Take My Hand

By : GriffinLillani12
  • From on August 12, 2005
    I laugh at the bride. >:D
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  • From ANON - babychan on August 11, 2005
    I read Anon's reviews. And I thought it was funny because I totally got the impression that it was Wufei who cried out that he objected. LOL So I went back and read it again and I can see it being read both ways. I think... that made me like this fic even more. Kinda like those pictures that are all dots and you can see pictures in them but no one really sees the same thing. Also, and this is very important don't put down your own work. Sure we are all our own worst critics, but...If you don't like it, don't post it. Fix it, edit it, rewrite it, until you are proud of it. I mean, if the author doesn't even like it, why would the readers? I mean I liked this but if you just post anything, whether you are proud of it or not, and most of it is bad...then people will stop reading your work. Or your reviews will be more negative than postive. As a writer myself, I know that reviews keep me writing. (since I don't get paid for it ^_~ ) Even if you are scared to really put effort in, in fear that it will get flamed still do your best. Because in the end, what really matters is if *you* like it. I never post unless I like it and it flows like I want it. I have a fic that I have been working on for YEARS, Its long and no where near finished. Often I feel bad for my readers because of my pickiness about posting but many of them have endured these years because I only post what I am proud of. Sure I got flamed. Many times. And it hurts but I am still proud of the work I've created. And in the end, that is what matters. Anon, had it right. Post what you are proud of. You'll grow as a writer. I promise you. Still, I liked this fic. ^_^ Keep writing and improving.
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  • From ANON - sminty on August 11, 2005
    loved it. Short and sweet. Buy yet it still held a lot of emotion. 1x5 is my favorite pair. I hope to read more of them from you. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2005
    What you have now is something that could be made into an interesting fic. However, just writing dialogue doesn't tell much of a story. It makes the characters seem flat, 2 dimensional. Flesh it out a bit. Descriptions of place, characters, emotions, would make it all the more interesting. Also, I have a problem with the characterization. Heero has never struck me as the type of person to impulsively shout ''I object!'' at a wedding. Or Wufei to be the type of man to run off from the aisle. But this is your story. You want to make it work? *Sell* it to me. Remember that most people expect crap from fanfiction. Prove them wrong. Hopefully, I'll see this fic in a month - much improved and fascinating. ^_^
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  • From SpiritSeeker on August 11, 2005
    That was okay. I like Wufei/Heero pairings, but this was a little short for me. But it's okay cause Relena was left at the alter. So that just makes up for the shortness.
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  • From on August 11, 2005
    That was cute! I'm just glad that Relena (it was Relena right?) didn't get Heero! They are horrible together! So this was great!
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