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Reviews for Passion vs. Rational Thinking

By : Flyrisha
  • From ANON - Serenity-san on August 21, 2005
    ~drools over the yummyness of this chapter~ YAY! Vegeta and Bulma got lucky! ~smacks Vegeta for being a prick~ Meanie!

    Lovely chapter, congradulations on such a well rounded chapter especially for your very first one. I hope to see more from you and soon, I think you are very talented.


    P.S. You might need to run spell check and grammer check, found a few booboo's. Try reading it aloud and you would be surprised at how easy it is to find mistakes.

    Wonderful.

    MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!


    Serenity
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  • From ANON - Death on August 18, 2005
    So cool! Please update soon! I have to see what happens next! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Alastair (nl) on August 17, 2005
    Not too shabby for a first time. You just need to find a beta-reader or something. Someone good with grammar and spelling.
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  • From ANON - lafemmevegeta on August 14, 2005
    that was really good. I love these stories. pleze continue to write more chapters, maybe hit spell check once in a while. if u don't, I won't care. I would still read. keep writing, keep writing, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - miharu on August 14, 2005
    add more...why did you stop when it getting good...you trying to kill me or something...hurry up...i haven't got long...you better update
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