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Reviews for Broken Will

By : Kaos
  • From ANON - Liah on September 05, 2005
    LOL Bryan and Kevin!!!!!!! LOL i cannot imagine them two together LOL so amusing... anyway at least things are looking up for Max yey!
    update soon please.
    Liah xx
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  • From ANON - Rejiita on September 04, 2005
    Hahaha, bryan flirting with kevin! cool !!!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on September 04, 2005
    Ah man I was just gonna suggest a threesome. I dunno who to choose. I like the thought of Bryan and Max as Bryan could kick Kai's head in if he doesn anything bad to Max again, but then I think of Max and Kevin. Kevin could sort Ray out as well. Man I'm stuck. Great story though. I guess whichever pairing you go for will be alright with me. I wish they could threesome though. Or bring Tal into the picture for one of them.
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  • From ANON - DrawFire on September 03, 2005
    Bryan/Max! Then make Ian pop up out of nowhere and make him ask Kevin out and- ignore me..... ^^;

    Very nice! Though Bryan was kinda scary while 'talking' to Kev... Oh and I love the protective granma sentence, well done! Update soon please so I can reveiw again! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ayaa on August 26, 2005
    I love this! I hope you update soon! Poor Max....though I am a Kai fangirl, I do believe that Kai deserved to be punched.
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  • From ANON - Liah on August 24, 2005
    awwwwwwwwwwwwww bless poor Maxie!!!! get him with Bry instead mwhaha - thats if that WAS really Bry? hn?

    Liah xx
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  • From ANON - DrawFire on August 22, 2005
    They're all so mean to Max... Why? TELL ME!!! *cough*

    Right... Update soon, can't wait for Bryan to get in there... ^_^ And this is a great fic...
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  • From ANON - chibi hentai on August 21, 2005
    God Damn! That is the second time this damn site has cut off my reviews! ... But the rest was... *add an eye to my face* But again, up date soon ^^.
    Ja ne.
    p.s: The end of chapter four? Did the site cut it off or something? It seemed like Rei's dialog was cut off randomly. Unless you ment do do that? THERE! Now my reveiw is finished! *curses AFF's random glitches*
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  • From ANON - chibi hentai on August 21, 2005
    Well, the chapters are short, but you have a great story line ^^ i'm liking it! Can't wait for more. I like this angsty side of Max too, but Kai's so mean! That bastard, doing that to poor Max ;_; . I am really liking your writing style too, nice and descriptive but not boringly so. Keep up the good work! I'd like to see you make the chapters a little bit longer though :/. With short ones, right when you get into the chapter it stops >_
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  • From ANON - DrawFire on August 20, 2005
    Ooooo! Is this Max/Bryan!? Anyway... I'm loving this! Update soon... And they should meet... Well... That's my opinion...
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  • From ANON - Rejiita on August 20, 2005
    YAAY!!!! Max/Bryan!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Draza on August 19, 2005
    awww....Max/Bryan...DO THAT!!!

    P.S: Great chappie!!
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  • From ANON - Virpi on August 19, 2005
    I like this, but not Max/Kai. Max/Bryan is way better! :) Can you please make them meet each others? Sorry if I made mistakes, but I don't speak English very much, 'cause I'm Finn! :)
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  • From ANON - kiotana on August 19, 2005
    well i came back cause i had no other fics to read and it wasn't as depressing once they got online. if they do meet they should wait after another chat or something first. could you possibly make this a little more cheerful^^; plz!
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  • From ANON - ‘.:.•¨Freckles¨•.:.’ on August 18, 2005
    Gah, I feel like a baka for not reading the summary clearly. X.x;;

    Hmm…Max and Bryan…Bryan and Max… *ponders pairing for a few minutes* O.o Or is Bryan/Max going to be the pairing? I’ve got to stop making assumptions so quickly. X.x;; Aww, I can totally picture Max and Bryan meeting and becoming friends, since they’re both full of lots of angst in your story (but right now it’s mostly angsty Max)! ^^ *loves an angsty Max-chan* I hope to read more! And, do what you want with the Max & Bryan friendship thing…if you want to finish the fic sooner, then have them meet up in the next chapter…if not, I’ll be happy to read more Max angst! ^^ Please continue!
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