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Reviews for The Alchemists Guide to Relationships Part 1: Lust

By : MissB
  • From ANON - The Mad Fangirl on September 27, 2005
    *sets about reviewing ALL the chapters as soon as she has a few minutes, because she loves this story and doesn't want to beloved author to get discoraged*
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  • From ANON - Constantly Baffled on September 26, 2005
    So why is Clara freaking out about? Is Whinry gonna bust into the new relationship? Find out next time, in THE WORLD OF TOMORROW!!
    sorry, wrong show. Anywho, don't let the low number of reviews discourage you. People are reading your story, their just to lazy to review. It's them, not you. You story is good, I'm reading it after all, and I don't read crappy stories. Meaning yours is good.
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  • From drake220 on September 26, 2005
    well, anyone who doesn't review this is an idiot! you should put the penis cake in the blurb. that'd get you votes. But honestly, it's not your story. There are almost NO m/f fma lovers on this site for some reason and really none outside of winry/ed. However, I think the basic quality of this story is so great, I sincerely wish everyone would read it! It's on my fav list. About the chapter, it was funny, touching and realistic with the clara not wanting to hve sex after seeing ed's high profile life and winry's reaction to the news ed's got a girlfriend/ed's obliviousness to her feelings.
    just a great job as usual
    oh,btb, you wrote sing instead of sign when roy and riza are talking.
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  • From ANON - Adria on September 25, 2005
    I love this fic! It's very well written. I find that a lot of fics end up with poor grammar, spelling, etc., but yours is almost right on the money (sorry, I'm the grammar police in my family). Keep going! FMA forever!
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  • From ANON - roanae on September 24, 2005
    really good story, i check it everyday 4 updates
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  • From ANON - P.C. on September 24, 2005
    Hey, I wanted to comment on the first chapter, but after reading the second chapter...well, I like clara but I really can't see her with Ed. But it's still a good story! Great work!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 22, 2005
    poor ed. he totally does not deserve the pain of the teasing to come. I am just suggesting that Psiren doesn't come to his rescue; i think it would demean a guy with edward's ego. Beyond that, the kink was kinky, the humor was great (the obit featuring Ed's virginity? priceless that. make an entire ficlet over that. possibly one of the wittiest things i've ever read. fabulously hysterical and spot on cruel. wonderful). just a good chapter. update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Constantly Baffled on September 06, 2005
    This is the first Clara/Ed story I think I've ever read. it's nice to see something other than Ed/Roy stories out there. is this story going to continue as a Clara/Ed, or are you going to make it a collections of different Ed/?? pairings? I hope you keep writing with the Clara/Ed story, but if you write any other ed-pairing stories, i'll keep an eye out for them.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 05, 2005
    bravo for the realism! Virgin Ed's reaction was absolutely spot on and very beautiful, in a vulnerable sort of way. I really liked the language and banter and also how unsure Ed was about what was going. Honestly, this is the most characteristic way I can see Ed losing his virginity. Clara is, I agree, a great character and you expanded her very nicely. Is Winry going to find out? Also, how much older is she then him? I am nervous if everyone teases Ed about this! He will certaintly not handle it well! I am extremely curious how Clara's going to handle the morning after. Update soon please! this is a wonderful fic!!
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  • From ANON - The Mad Fan Girl on September 02, 2005
    Yay! You wrote more stuff! *does the dance of joy* Just for the record, you're one of my favorit writers of adult FMA fiction. *settles in to wait for the next part*
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  • From ANON - Durian on September 02, 2005
    So far a very somber story but the writing is great and the direction is almost limitless at the moment. It shows great promise, lets see what you can do.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on September 02, 2005
    my fav author has a new Ed fic!! Hurray!!!! The feeling of lonliness came across prefectly clear, especially with the snow references. Are you going to say why Al is living in Resembol instead of with Big Bro? Update soon!!
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