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Reviews for CRUSH

By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - listersgirl on January 19, 2006
    This is a fabulous fic. I love how you keep Roy and Edward in character! Some of the lines just kill me too. As a result I did an illustration for it and I'm going to post it right now on AdultFanFictionArtists. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionArtists/
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on October 24, 2005
    I liked it very much :)
    I think you should make a sequel, i like the personalites you gave them
    V
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  • From ANON - Sevlow on October 19, 2005
    Wow, that was amazingly in-character. It's a rare find to read an unconventional love pairing and still have them both in character, awesome job. Kinda sad toward the end, but still absolutely DELICIOUS! Not to mention that I was giggling maniacly the whole time. Keep it up.
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  • From EmbersEye on September 26, 2005
    Lol. Well I'm not entirely sure what to say about that one. I did really like that it was in the first person, though. That's unusual. Ed was very in character - it made for an overall very different perspective. I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Moshi Moshi Mai on September 20, 2005
    LOL~

    I loved it. It was hilarious x)
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  • From on September 18, 2005
    Just like your other one-shot fics this one was just as fantastic. I look forward to reading more of your works. Please continue to write you really do have the best one-shots out there. Arigatou Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - mayfaire on September 17, 2005
    that was hot but what was hotter and funnier was the way ed describes their ehem session its so hilarious!I LOVE IT!you perfectly got ed's character verrrrrryyy nice. more i should say!
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  • From ANON - zula on September 15, 2005
    That was fucking perfect... :)
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on September 14, 2005
    Wow, that was good. I loved how you kept the two of them in character so well. Good job!
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  • From ANON - RealRoyMustang on September 08, 2005
    Awesome and Mustang IS a bastard (that is what Ed loves about him but is scared to admit it!) GOOD STORY!!!!!
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  • From ANON - melissa on September 05, 2005
    Man! That was well written! And so Hot. Mmm...
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  • From Asidian on September 04, 2005
    Ohhhh, your smut is so much love. (Grr, review cut off here.... continuing, now ^^)

    I -adore- that Ed gets so completely and thoroughly pwned- not equivalent exchange at -all-, and I love it. I love your dialogue, as usual, and the way they play off each other, and the way that Roy is just so amazingly, manipulatively -together- throughout the entire situation.

    *purr* I love you.
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  • From Asidian on September 04, 2005
    Ohhhh, your smut is so much love.
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  • From ANON - Ebony Clomen on September 04, 2005
    I lloved it! it was so funny and hot. God I love you!
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  • From ANON - Spark on September 03, 2005
    HAHA!! that was great! shit, lol god Mustangs' an ass! lol
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