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Reviews for Anticipation

By : Robyn
  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 04, 2005
    WOW!! *lets out a big breath* That was super super awesome! I'm so glad you did another chapter!! I love the way you portray Goku (he's so hot in this...*swoon*) Thanks for making my day! OOH and, if your muses permit, ANOTHER! MORE!!! NOW!!! *begs and pleads*

    Keep up the fantastic work! (makes me so jealous! lmao!)

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on November 04, 2005
    Yes everyone's right you HAVE TO CONTINUE WITH THIS YOU HEAR ME!!!


    "It's not nice to tease the animals with such great G/V lemons... They tend to turn savage if you don't keep on writting...." ^____^


    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD GOKU'S POV TOO!! How long has he been obsessed with Videl? WHY is he obsessed with her? What's wrong with his and Chichi's relationship? Was the first time premeditated or was it thought out of the blue? Was Goku planning from the beginning on letting Videl know it was him al the time and not Gohan, or was it just something he decided on at the end of the sex? How is he so sure she won't tell Chichi or his son? Isn't he afraid of Pan finding out? Does he have any special hidden feelings for Videl or is he in just for the forbidden wild sex? Is Videl his first mistress ever or has he had others before? (like, perhaps, Bulma?)

    Does Vegeta know or suspect anything about Goku being attracted towards his daughter-in-law, or is Videl the first and only one to ever have become aware of it? And WHERE is Goten?

    Ohh so many questions... You have to add a third chapter with Goku's POV, PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - maccam on November 02, 2005
    OMG yes THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING ANOTHER CHAPTER. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. PIX PLEASE TELL HER TO WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY. :)
    I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. Just to read how Goku is like a animal is a real turn on. GREAT CHAPTER AGAIN *CLAPS* (but i want more)
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  • From ANON - Little Bitch on November 02, 2005
    I didnt know there was a second chappie to this! Thanks again! *drools some more* Wow!! Now Im wondering why hes behaving this way. More please! XD
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  • From ANON - Little Bitch on November 02, 2005
    *drool* Forceful Goku...yeeeeaaaahhhhhh *fans* Very nice! Im going to have nice dreams because of this and I thank you. XDDDDD
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  • From ANON - Ginia on October 08, 2005
    Now that was a surprise... and hot as hell. I certainly hope there will be more of this?
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  • From ANON - smokie on September 26, 2005
    heh i thought it was vegeta you should have one with her trunks and goten
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  • From ANON - Bura-chan on September 22, 2005
    I rarely read this couple--but I have before. But wow, that was so intense, erotic, and seductive--not to mention kinky! ^_~ I loved it! Great job!

    Bura-chan
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  • From ANON - Billy Hillneck on September 19, 2005
    She read it out loud to me and said I had to write this to you. That made me hotter than a jellyfish in the middle of the desert.
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  • From ANON - Noel on September 19, 2005
    GAWD--DAHM That was awesome totally didn't expect that. WTG GIRLY
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s Mate on September 14, 2005
    SQUEEE!!!!!!!!!!! Almost as soon as I started to read this I knew it had to be Goku, Gohan is just too tame to think he can tie up his wife and get away with it. :D That was great! I loved it! ~holds out an empty plate~ MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!.

    Love ya!

    V.M.
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  • From Orchideater on September 10, 2005
    THAT was AWESOME. Ahhhhh!!! XD Totally freaking awesome. I don’t know why, but I just had a little voice in my head that told me it might be “that” pairing, that made me click on a fic that appeared to be a pairing I usually never read– I’m so glad I listened to it. Maybe it was wishful thinking, because I do like “that” pairing. I even had a plot bunny somewhat similar to this type of story! (Similar just in the basics) Fantastic lemon, delicious sexual imagery– best het fic I’ve read in quite a while.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on September 07, 2005
    There aren't many fic out there with this pairing. I just love them together!

    He's so hot and better for her, and she's so much prettier and nicer than that annoying older woman that is with him.

    Oh, please PLEASE write more chapters! I wanna know how their relationship will be from now on, and may be a POV of him thinking about how he's been obsessed with her and what made him take the chance and do this... act so unlike the way everyone sees him.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on September 07, 2005
    Me again! I MUST say that this is one of my favorite het fics...(and that's saying something since i normally hate it lmao!) - Can you please delete my other review? I wasn't even thinking when i wrote it and i don't want to give the 'surprise' away...*complete and utter guilt*

    Thanks and this is awesome *shakes your hand furiously*

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on September 07, 2005
    *huge grin* Damn you for making me read het! XD But it was sooooo good. I messed up and read the reviews before I read the fic and found out the surprise but I still liked how you pulled it off. I love the pairing too, makes it more interesting.
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