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Reviews for Transformation

By : SelenityJade
  • From tehuti88 on October 10, 2005
    I don't really read anything indepth around this site since 1. I don't care for fanfics--I'm an original fic person myself, and 2. most erotica is written in a way that totally turns me off, or else I just don't sympathize with the characters. Still, I used to watch "DBZ" religiously and was curious about a Bulma/Vegeta fic and so checked this out from your link at the AFF Group. I admit I kind of browsed the beginning sections to get to the ending part. ^_^; But I enjoyed it. I like how you kept Vegeta in character and didn't make him all mushy or romantic like most people would do. Him being pretty inconsiderate to Bulma was a good touch since that seems just like what he would do.

    So...there you go, one of my remarkably rare reviews...I don't think I've even left one before. o_o

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  • From greengal48 on October 07, 2005
    Some fics tend to have a mind of their own... I like this one and the way it lead you. I am, however sad that Bulma didn't have a climax. Kinda leaves an opening for more *wiggles eyebrows*. A good story. Well done. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Vegeta\'s Mate on September 18, 2005
    That was yummy! I can imagine Vegeta was probably like that with her the first time. Good job!

    I'd like to see more of this if your muse can tempt you to do it! ~nudge, nudge. Whispers toSJ muse~ Make her write more of this. ^_^
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