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Reviews for Tears of Betrayal

By : Tenshi
  • From ANON - xXxOWARIxXx on January 14, 2007
    it a little too short...and update!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ray rei fan on December 31, 2005
    the wan being watcht must be ray because in the azian tornement there were the white tigers trying to to take ray in there team and that explains the part in the story that the wan being watcht had more atantion in azia

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  • From ANON - ray rei fan on December 31, 2005
    do you aver update your storys?

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  • From ANON - GREEL on November 21, 2005
    the being watched is Max but i don't know whos watching
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  • From ANON - Lilly on October 29, 2005
    I like this one
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  • From butterflyishida on September 25, 2005
    what?! that's it?? NOooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! MORE! I Demand more! Can it be Bryan/Rei? Please? That pairing so doesn't get enough love. pleasepleaseplea--

    Rei: *smacks* stop harrassing people to write your fave pairing.
    Butterfly: but it doesn't get enough LOVE! You know you want more fics with Bryan...
    Rei: yes...but it doesn't mean you can beg and harras people into it.


    *coughs* very good start nonetheless. butbutbut....*chibi eyes* Bryan watching Rei? pwease?
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  • From ANON - LosingGrip on September 25, 2005
    I know whose being watched it's Max and I know who this "Him" is it's Kai so the watcher has to be either Tala or Bryan and I think that Bryan was too erm, how can I put this....................Hung up on Ray to go after Max so I'm gonna say Tala, Spencer seems to well controled and Ian seems more chatty then to just say so little. So Tala, well tell me if I'm wrong and update soon or the wait will kill me..................Lol, great job. Bye.
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  • From ANON - Virpi on September 24, 2005
    Yeah I re-readed it. And I take my words back, it is not a Tala/Max. *pouts* Would have been nice.
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  • From ANON - Virpi on September 24, 2005
    Oooookaayyy..... That was kinda... weird.
    Can I guess the pairing? I think it might be a Tala/Max, though I haven't seen the last half of Beyblade season one, cos they cut it there. Ray versus Eddy was the last episode we saw.
    The chapter was too short, that's all. Hope you do the next longer. I look forward to seeing the next chapter, so update!
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  • From ANON - rosie on September 24, 2005
    cliff hanger. its appealin an good . but who is watching them i dont now
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on September 23, 2005
    Oooh, what's this pairing? It must be one of the demo boys as they're saying about Russia. I hope this is a Tyson/Tala fic. Is it? I love that pairing. Looking forward to the next part.
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