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Reviews for Broken Will: Rewritten

By : Kaos
  • From ANON - KamiaKotai on December 22, 2005
    Hey,

    Kenny you evil little creep! Poor Max how dare Kai do that I outta beat the shit out of all three of them, little assholes. What about Takao was he in on it too? Poor Max, I hope someday Bryan beats them up for him. -clenches fists- I really hope they get what's coming to them, I'm just so mad. >.< Anyway update when you can, I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - Liah on December 21, 2005
    oooooooo i really like this rewritten version, but yey maxie for hitting kai, that guy is seriuosly evil!
    and poor max's mum, thats gotta hurt! *sigh* i think they're having lots of problems in that household now...
    update soon plz
    Liah xx
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  • From ANON - Rabaku-Cookie on December 07, 2005
    I've spotted your fic both here and at FF.net and I'd jsut like to tell you how annoying it is that you've put "no mpreg, i hate mpreg" into the summary of both. I don't really care if you like mpreg or not, I do, and when i type it into a search, your fic always comes up. Unless you're specifically trying to get the mrpeg fans to read your story by doing this (in which case, fine, I have no problem with devious self-promotion) theres really no reason for you to bother putting that in the summary. Please consider changing your summaries, and I will consider reading your fic. Thank you for your time.
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  • From ANON - Kei on October 07, 2005
    Ack! ^-^ Awesome, can't wait to see what happens (is a reader of the first fic.)
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  • From ANON - Liah on October 04, 2005
    ooo i like the re-written version just as much so far! update soon!
    Liah xx
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on October 02, 2005
    I don't know why you've rewritten it. It was real good as it was. Good chapter though. Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Rejiita on October 02, 2005
    waaaw..really good! *_*
    better!!! XD Love it! Can't wait for more chaps soon *_* Bryanmax (L).(L)
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