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Reviews for Forgotten Tears

By : Bulma
  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 02, 2006
    wow nice i cna't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on January 01, 2006
    Evil cliffies are such a good thing. Nice shift from the one-shot, but it is flowing nicely. The only semi-negative comment I have is the excessive use of 'fuck'. Is Goku using it for deliberate shock value, or is that the only type of sex he has known - just sex, no heart, no love, no passion. He still feels outwardly closed - like he won't let anyone see past his mask, even while he complains about wearing one. Wonder what was going through Vegeta's head during Goku's week of wigging out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Macha on December 31, 2005
    AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh, you left it there?! You had better update soon dear!

    A lovely bit of angst and drama. So good to see you back in action!
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on November 29, 2005
    chapter 1 : intriguing

    chapter 2 : cute...very cute ... and funny!

    chapter 3 : don't hesitate to write it...
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 27, 2005
    hehehe.... I loved the guessing game part. That was a neat twist. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 25, 2005
    Very well written introspective. Nice job.
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