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  • From ANON - wild seven on January 03, 2007
    Offense is also spelled with an "s" instead of a "c". Heh, gomen ne! ^^ ::sweat drop::

  • From on January 03, 2007
    Oh crap, that was another story. My bad, I did already comment on this one... lol. Oy... lol. ^^

  • From on January 03, 2007
    I just have one thing really. I noticed that you misspelled defense, there should be an "s" where the "c" is, like I just spelled actually (lol). I really enjoyed your story, this is probably the third time I've read it, and I feel so bad for not commenting the first time....

  • From on October 09, 2006
    Oh wow... I'm so sorry, I've read this before but I didn't review! >< Huh... now what to say? I really love how you put this piece together, it stayed true to both the anime and manga and it couldn't have been more perfect. Not too many stories out there do that, or are able to do that, but it's always so refreshing to come across one that does. ^^ Beautiful... simply beautiful. I hope to read more from you! :) (:

  • From ANON - Vocarin on August 07, 2006
    Unbelievable.
    I can honestly say I've never seen an Ed/Winry fic so beautifully written, nor so closely attuned to their characters. I especially liked that analogy about Ed and his automail, 'evidence of a hard and soft side.'
    Hope to see more such masterpieces. Wonderful work

  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 16, 2006
    That was very well crafted; good plot leading up to "the act" itself. What more can I say?

  • From ANON - Marlemon on January 17, 2006
    YAY!!!! Best Win/Ed fic EVER!!!!! Thank you soooo much! I've been looking all day for something worth reading and I find this! I seriously loved it so much. So in character but still so tender and sweet. Thank you SO MUCH!!!

  • From ANON - W. Michael Isard on November 27, 2005
    That was deep, really deep. The constant flashbacks, indepth storyline, the inner most thoughts of the characters. This story was absolutely amasing. Please keep up the good work and keep the stories coming. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Till next time, later.

  • From ANON - daffybear on November 23, 2005
    I believe this is the most beautifully written Ed/Winry lemon I have ever read. The poetic quote you used at the beginnig of the story fit their relationship really well. Your style and ability to capture the readers' attention was evident in your words and the synopsis. The quietness on the surface and the emotional turmoil laying underneath really drew me to the story.The character developments were exquisitely compelling. You gave them good reasons to justify their response and actions. And you were able to keep their characters in check. There were a few errors in the writing. You may want to have your story edited next time if you want to shoot for perfection. But nonetheless, the story's remarkable.
    I also had the chance to read your RK one-shots and they were just as awesome as this one. Especially "Whisper", it had a similar anguish tone with this story and the bitterness and sweetness of it was just irresistable. I just wonder why you put your RK one-shots under a different account (assuming I am not mistaken you as someone else). Anyway, hope you don't mind me sort of combining two reviews into one.
    Well, keep writing and best of luck to you with future projects.

  • From ANON - Sarah on November 18, 2005
    OH! This was soooo good i loved it sooo much! Keep up the good work!

  • From ANON - WOOT on November 17, 2005
    That was great. Go Ed and Winry. Just some spelling and grammer errors, but the story's great! P.S. I can't spell either so don't worry, you aren't alone!

  • From ANON - Josh on November 16, 2005
    Hey Eden this is a good fic I like it and that is true between Ed and Winry. They have feelings for each other but they never show it I am glad you wrote this fic and keep it up this was a good read

  • From ANON - NUNICHAN on November 15, 2005
    This was beautifull. I really love it. I love EdxWinry, this fic was dealt with a lot of emotions it made me feel happy and sad. Really liked the fact that it was not JUST sex, it was a form of affection.Very good work I hope to read more FMP works from you.

  • From ANON - Manda on November 11, 2005
    Oh wow, that was really good.

    There were a few spelling errors but sometimes that just happens.

    But that was definitely really really good. I loved the flashbacks, and all the emotion, especially from Ed. This was really quite wonderful.

  • From ANON - Becky on November 10, 2005
    Very well written. I loved how you include the childhood memories. It added to the story and really brought out thier relationship.

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