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Reviews for A puppy to Kai

By : Ludra
  • From ANON - Vampire on November 19, 2005
    Good story,I can't wait for the next chapter!Update soon
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  • From serena429 on November 19, 2005
    seems good so far, keep up the good work, kay?
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  • From on November 19, 2005
    This fiction sounds very interesting friend!!!! Im a fervent tyka/kaitaka shipper myself so hehhe. Hmm well hey i gots an idera if you want i can beta read your story and fix grammar errors for you before you update^^ English is not my mothertongue but it is my second language so i know it by heart^^ Just send me an email if you'd like for me to beta it for you! :)
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  • From ANON - Virpi on November 18, 2005
    Okaaay... It was a little short, like you said, and in my opinion it went too fast. Slow down a bit, don't rush it all through in that small space. But I'm waiting you to update.
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