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By : ibshafer
  • From blackfeenix on October 10, 2007
    wow....just, wow. That last chapter is the perfect balance of hot guy-on-guy action and such deep heart-breaking love. The silence was perfect. I can just picture, the room filled with just moans. -shivers- Oh don't you love having a great imagination -grins- I can't wait for more.
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  • From Afrieal on June 29, 2007
    please PLEASE continue this story it's WONDERFUL!!! if Affie and i do half as well as you with our story (still in the planning stages) we'll consider ourselves luckey

    Rysha and Affie

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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on March 25, 2007
    Oh.My.God. This is simply amazing. You have to update as soon as possible! Theirs is such a beautifully tragic love! How Roy knows that "the end" is near, that circumstances beyond their control would ultimately, finally, and irrevocably draw Edward away from him, I have no idea. such bittersweet drama! You're breaking my heart! And, Oh Lord!, I just know I'll cry a river when the end does come! I don't know how closely you are sticking to the canon, but if you are staying really close to it then I know I'm done for! :) Are you going to include the movie canon in this too? I should just go now and get a big box of tissues and be done with it! :) You have written such intense passion into every moment that Roy and Ed have had together! (Not to mention the totally hot smex! w00t!) The whole rest of the world just seems to disappear in the face of their need to have one another. Even their first wild encounter in the office had such a desperate intensity of desire to it. It's like every moment they have together will be their last and they are trying to draw anything and everything they can out of it. They need each other like they need to breathe. I totally love this!!
    Please update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From milky on March 25, 2007
    *_* I love how you write them, so very much. Ed is so sweet and Roy is just starting to realize how much he needs him, and it is beautiful.
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  • From Yaoigirl69 on March 23, 2007
    Wow! *brain shutting down* that was so Hot! and sad and so...*can't think of words* I hope you post more this is so enjoyable to read. *wonders off in search of cold shower*
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  • From on October 27, 2006
    I like the preview as well! :D
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  • From on October 27, 2006
    Whoo, that was very nice...lol. I'm commenting on both chapters, and it's very... well... hot, I suppose is the right way to say it. :) (:
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  • From ANON - Sliefoxx on October 26, 2006
    ......

    *lunges at you and strangles*

    FINISH IT!!!!! FINISH THE PORN!! THE INTROSPECT!!! THE PORN!!! AHHHHHHH!!! DARN YOU IRENE!!

    XD
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  • From on October 26, 2006
    Oh wow, that was very well done. I really enjoyed the first chapter, and I hope the rest of the story is just as wonderful. :) (:
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  • From ANON - InuGrlRayn on September 12, 2006
    FINISH THIS FIC, WOMAN!! Sorry I haven't finished reading Branded yet. Gah...sooo busy.... Your previews made me all drooly though. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lynz on September 11, 2006
    Oh My God. You have gooooot to write more to this. That preview made me almost need to take an ice cold shower.
    this is great. Add more like...yesterday.
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  • From ANON - haunted angel (couldn't sign in *kicks aff*) on January 29, 2006
    O_O you pimped out my story. That's like... the ultimate compliment to me. Thanks deary. *huggles*

    Beautiful as always. I impatiently await the rest of the chapter and the chapter 2 rewrite.
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 29, 2006
    [To your response]



    ^^ Hey my fav author! I'm fine, though that drooling problem hasn't left yet... I talked ta my doctor, and he suggested less roy/ed stories. but I couldn't do that! I refused to listen to his advice (sighes) I guess I'll just have ta drink plenty of water, ne? ^^ I'm getting more sleep (sadly)... I screwed up my sleeping clock sooo bad I go to sleep at nine now! *cries* its horrible waking at 5 in the morning because my body refuses to sleep too long! I can't wait to read your ending of Undiscovered! ^^Oooo I gotta read that! If it does as you say... *giggles* I'll have to check it out... Make sure its safe for you to read! Don't want your brain going caput after reading it! ^^ I'll follow your advice, as you haven't steered me wrong yet! ^^lol I'm sure it'll be just as great as you say!

    By the way! I've gone to another site recently: You Tube... Its like a site for music videos (and episodes of some shows) made by people around the world.... You can find TONS of anime videos with music from like Linkin Park and others... You should look up ~'Brothers'~ and listen to it... Make sure to add ~Full Metal Alchemist~ with it... Its a song sung by Edward Elric's voice actor! And it is sooo BEAUTIFUL! Its sad too, but its great, I think.... You might like it!
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 29, 2006
    *sees update* HURRAY!


    *sees its only a preview* Darn! *gets bubbly* But its /still/ an update!

    *Reads preview*

    *squeals*

    Oh I can't wait to read the full update!

    Fuck 'em Roy! Woo hoo! ^^

    I love it! And I can't wait to read those other chapters, and the revised chapter as well! *drools*

    Oh, this chap is gonna be hot, isn't it? *giggles*

    Its gonna be fuunnnnnnnnnn!


    Roy wants to kkkkkkkkkisiiiiiissssss himmmmm......
    He wants to hhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuggggggg hhhhhimmmmmm.
    He wants to fffffffuuuuucccccckkkkk hhhhhhhhhimmmmmmm!

    OOOOOOhhh I can't wait! I'm gonna be here till the end, don't you worry! Ya got me hooked! ^^ Ya lost me with the 'splaining, but I understand your re-writing that chapter.. 'S all I care about... That and the other chapters! ^^lol I'm hopeless, sorry, but at least I understand what I do! ^^lol






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  • From ANON - Jessie on January 29, 2006
    I have to say that I am struck by few stories I read here as heavily as I have been struck by this one. I am in awe of the grace you bestowed on such a simple, seemingly innocuous, story. The first chapter spoke well for itself, and I was incredibly pleased to see that there was more... but not before I reread the first chapter twice! This is amazing, and I can't wait to see more. I'll be watching!
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