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Reviews for The Time Saga

By : Priscila
  • From ANON - Macha on January 01, 2006
    A bigger, badder Cell huh? Mwuahahahahahahaha.... I'll stay tuned.
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  • From ANON - Macha on December 31, 2005
    Well, this does sound like an interesting adventure fic. Haven't seen one of those for a while. I'll be back for chapter 2.

    You mentioned that you wished to have any errors pointed out. I saw a few, but there are only a couple that stayed with me.

    Firstly, The English language uses quotation marks as indicators that people are talking instead of dashes. "Blah blah, blah blah."

    Secondly, the tenses for the verb fly. You used it in this sentence: Gohan reached him a little later, and both of them flied towards the forests, where Piccolo used to meditate.

    The proper tense is 'flew'. Gohan reached him a little later, and both of them flew towards the forests, where Piccolo used to meditate.

    All in all, I am very impressed with your grasp of the grammar and spelling for English being your second language. (LOL, my spelling is atrocious, and it's my native language.)

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  • From ANON - zazan on December 31, 2005
    Your fic's good^^. I'll be surely back. Happy New Year^^!
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