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Reviews for Equilibrium

By : ibshafer
  • From ANON - ibshafer on January 02, 2006
    Thanks so much for the compliments [blush] - always great to hear. As for the format issues - man, you couldn't be more right and I'm frustrated with it myself. I have been UNABLE to upload documents - I wonder if there's a FAQ out there - and have been forced to use the cut-'n-paste into the text area method, which strips documents of all such formatting niceties... Each time I try to upload a new chapter or story, I try to get it to work, but it doesn't recognize what I've loaded ("Please load new chapter//octet stream") whatever that means... I'll keep trying - stick with me. Hope the writing is worth the annoyance... [And great thanks for the compliments on the "glorious metal parts" line. :D]

    Irene
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  • From drake220 on January 02, 2006
    I have two things to say: one, the whole making emphasis with -emphasis- thing just doesn't work. Sorry but it looks awkward and kind of silly. The writing here is too well done to be undermined by style issues like that. Why don't you use italics instead? It has a more pleasing visually adn has the same impact.
    two, "It saddened her that after years of obsessing over Edward Elric's glorious metal parts, she had no idea how to deal with the rest of him..."- SHEER GENIUS!!!! I mean, whoa! What a sentence! That was so...astoundingly descriptive of both the situation, the characters and your ability. Honestly those few words are just amazing. Blew my mind. Frankly it showed just how good you are. update!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 02, 2006
    I love this fic. Keep up the good writing!

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  • From morgansgirl23 on January 02, 2006
    I am so loving this story!! It has plenty of angst and romance in it and that is always a great combo!! Please update soon and good job.
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  • From ANON - Hauntedangel (too damn lazy to sign in yet) on January 01, 2006
    And here I thought I was gonna have to chase you down and threaten you with a fork to get you to finish it. I'm a huge yaoi fan but you are really making me love the EdxWinry pairing my dear
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