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Reviews for Arguments

By : Chikky
  • From Nahter12 on July 23, 2007
    did you seriously say A-spot?

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  • From ANON - Ryo on November 13, 2006
    Okie dokie... Roy's emoness with the cutting of wrists... wtf? And Riza not knowing, or not caring? I mean... that's a bit heartless.
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  • From ANON - Felidae on January 05, 2006
    Potential, potential...
    You have all the needed stuff for a good angst story here, try to avoid too many repetitions and give us a little more insight as to why Roy is cutting himself. If it's because of Riza's distrust, or because of stress, the added responsibility of training another alchemist, all together and none of these-you might also want to try to explain why Riza can shrug off Roy's self-mutilation this easily; either she's
    a:) completely dense(and I mean doorknob-like)
    b:) so wrapped up in her own hurt and self-pity, that she's basically blind to Roy's pain, or
    c:) a possessive bitch who doesn't really care about Roy as long as he doesn't talk with other women

    Either way, I would not let this two off the hook that easily; as I said, you have merely scratched the surface here, so try to dig deeper! ^ ~
    And for sound advice, you can always turn to me, kay?
    *hug*
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