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Reviews for A Price to Pay

By : Twylight
  • From ANON - Anna on August 12, 2006
    WHAAAAAT???? Don't tell me you're going to end it like that! You could, I don't know, change the movie end and say that Ed and Al stayed on their world and not in the other one, ARGH! You can't do this to me... *cries*
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  • From ANON - fma fan on August 11, 2006
    That was really good. Are you going to do a sequel.
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  • From ANON - michelle on August 11, 2006
    i loved this!!!!!! please make a sequel!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ri on August 02, 2006
    That was such a lovely chapter, thank you for sharing it with us, I loved this story and it ended lovely.
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  • From ANON - noah on August 01, 2006
    this is the best thing i have ever read. i totally addicted to this pair now. oh, man. i absolutly love it. you're a brilliant writer. you can write great smut but also... you can work it into the story so it seems natural instead of just... sex or something. wow. wonderful.
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  • From ANON - noah on August 01, 2006
    i love you! i mean... this was good. hot, but also well written. it's terrible but i'm picky about my smut and this is very good. ok, i'm off read the other chapters.
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  • From ANON - CallistaSky on February 06, 2006
    This is such a wonderful story...I'm adding it to my favs! And the added Maes/Roy chapter made me grin like mad. Please continue this!! I absolutely love your writing.
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  • From ANON - demon on February 02, 2006
    OH GOD THAT CANT BE IT CAN IT? I just read all the 10 chapters in a hour im SOO LOVING YOUT WRITTING STYLE! i love how you stayed on the story line. it was like the exact story with some behind the scenes. well anyways i dont know if your done with it or not (i hope not) but i have a pic that would go PERFECT with this story i didnt draw it or anything a friend gave the pic to me and this fic reminded me of it I LOVE FULL METAL ALCHEMIST AND YOU CAPTURED IT PERFECT please email me if you write any more or even just to chat (i love friends)
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 31, 2006
    mmm hughes/roy that was good right there. Great chapter ^^ Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 30, 2006
    Wow..... How the hell do you do five rounds in two fucking hours? Is that even possable?! Anyways I'm dieing to see how this is going to end up so I give you one piece of advice: STOP AND I SWEAR TO WHATEVER GOD EXIST I WILL HUNT YOUR HAPPY LITTLE ASS DOWN, HOLD A GUN TO YOUR HEAD AND MAKE YOU WRITE MORE!!!!!! That's all I have to say ^-^ Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - senko09 on January 29, 2006
    how cute! the ending was funny i laughed so hard i chocked on my french fries. more chapters or i wont stop saying.............Please please please i can keep this up for a long time...please please please please please ok i'm bored lol
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  • From ANON - senko09 on January 26, 2006
    that was a awsome chapter!!!!! Roy finally said "GO roy!!!" update soon.......I wounder what Ed will say.......update soon i want to see your killing me (falls over dead)
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  • From ANON - Sage on January 26, 2006
    very good
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 24, 2006
    Hooooo Roy just confessed!! OMG! That was a shocker!! Update soon!! I want to see how Ed is now gonna be after that confession! =3
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on January 23, 2006
    That was so hott. More?

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