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Reviews for The Flame Variable

By : Metranome
  • From GudenMulle on October 31, 2011
    The idea of Msutang as that fundamentally inexperienced is very alien and foreign to my slightly (very) perverted mind, but I loved the story. It made me smile, especially how Roy's brain couldn't shut up during the whole thing XD. And the end made me giggle! That could be a new project? :P . Do you TELL your parents that you read and write yaoi? That a brave man. I know for a fact that my parents are very open-minded, but I will NEVER tell them of my reading habits. Ever. It would not do well for an opening greeting when visiting XD.
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  • From SapphiresofIce on June 16, 2008
    That...That was delicious. I want to see that foursome. That would be possibly even more delicious. I love Gracia and Riza in this story- they aren't protrayed as betrayers and lover-stealers, and they are portryed, if you see where I'm going with that line of thought.
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  • From SapphiresofIce on June 16, 2008
    ...That...THAT IS SO MEAN!! Finally legal so I don't have to delete this off my computer, and all I get are teasers? T.T So unfair.
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  • From BlackberryPatch on February 17, 2007
    Oh, that was lovely!! I enjoyed that very much... ;b I love your writing style, especially your use of imagery. And the story itself... Well, that was quite a lot of fun. And sweet too. ;b Thanks for sharing! =]
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  • From ANON - Ginny on December 16, 2006
    Wow... That was so friggin awesome! The first three chapters where... different, to be sure, and awesome and very hot and the last chapter was so cool... Man I would like to know about their classroom activities... XD
    Oh and about homophobic parents... I know. My dad's like that, too... If he where ever to find out I spend at least half of my sparetime reading and writing yaoi he'd die on the spot... I'm lucky to live with my mom though, who isn't that bad... Good luck with them. Don't let it get you down and just keep on reading and writing, you're awesome at it :)
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  • From ANON - jennifer on October 31, 2006
    CRACK! CRACK I SAY!
    ROFL... you know.. i was all happy for roy.. and gracia didnt kill meas.. and then BOOM! a 0_o wtf moment. that was great. brilliant even. now wheres the graduation.. lol
    cant hide a glock in her bathrobe... what kinda of self respecting marksman couldn't do that? lol.
    the story was wonderful. the ending made my day! hope you continue and look forward to more
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  • From ANON - Lexi on October 17, 2006
    hey man, you already know how much this story rocks my heart! but you're shameless plugging was making me feel guilty, so i decided to leave ya a review. hehe. talk to you later. ;)
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  • From ANON - wolfloner on October 16, 2006
    that was absolutly wonderful. You should write a sequel. maybe. if you want to that is. no since in writing something you don't enjoy. XP
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  • From ANON - Kumiko on October 12, 2006
    this is my first HughesxRoy story that i read and i like it. Roy a virgin who would've thought that. LOL ^_^
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  • From ANON - Unforgivenlove on October 11, 2006
    when you were talking about Maes attributes and how he heped Roy in all his problmes, i wanted to cry SO much cause noow he's dead.

    And if santa is watching me, I'm charging him for being a pervert.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2006
    good
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  • From ANON - Larania on October 11, 2006
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    Roy's so far in the closet its not funny... Really. Good smut though.
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  • From ANON - Ari on October 10, 2006
    That was awesomely fluffy and adorable, and OH SO HOT. Maes/Roy is far from my favourite pairing, but *wow*. You win. I love you. And sorry about your homophobic family not letting you write yaoi. They should be shot, for this is pure unfiltered awesome. D:

    I'll go clean my chair now.
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  • From ANON - Candy Kaeko on October 10, 2006
    Uh oh...Roy's hooked... I doubt he'll ever date another woman ever again lol...or so I hope *evil grin*. good story by the way, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sylvir on October 10, 2006
    This is a great story. I love anything MaesXRoy. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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