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By : ibshafer
  • From EverSearching on June 01, 2012
    I love this story. It's so cute and virginal. And so Edward. He's such a science freak, that he would be like that. And, btw, Heat by Eiri Yuki? I think we have a Gravitation fan on our hands lol.
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  • From ANON - RhiaJade on April 14, 2011
    So I stumbled across your story at random, and just read it all the way through.

    First, the story is GREAT! Hilarious, unpredictable, and endearing, in typical (well, maybe not *so* typical) FMA fashion. If I had any drawing skills at all, there's quite a few scenes in there I would LOVE to see drawn.
    Second, I love that you did such a great job keeping everyone in character, while telling a different story. I've read so many fanfics where the story was fun, but the characters deviated so much it almost ruined the experience.
    Third, I CANNOT WAIT to read more!!
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  • From AnubisMonori on February 05, 2010
    This is a fantastic story. I'm enjoying every word. Please, continue as soon as possible.
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  • From NekoEro on September 24, 2009
    You did it! Yay! So happy to see this finished!
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  • From Beahmont on April 18, 2008
    … I would just like to point out that I find it vastly amusing that Ed is going to be reading a heterosexual sex manual written by a man in a committed homosexual relationship. Kudos on the Gravitation plug.
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  • From ANON - wild seven on June 17, 2007
    Aww, that was sweet. He gets it, just... not the sex part yet. Lol. :) (:
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  • From on June 16, 2007
    I have been reading this for a while...I can't stress to you how wonderfully it's written. I laugh in every chapter. You make that couple fit so nicely snug together. ( not that that don't^_^) But I can't explain it...so all I can say it very nice job! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From on March 14, 2007
    XD!! That was a most amusing chapter, so I enjoyed it immensely! ^^
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  • From YukinaRaven on February 15, 2007
    ..... There's going to be a note inside the picnic basket from Winry that reads 'You bastard! You chose food over us?!', isn't there? XD
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  • From milky on February 09, 2007
    I am very entertained by the overall concept - Ed failing at sex, Roy messing with his head (or god help us all, being sincere but uneducated himself perhaps?) And some of these scenes are genuinely smoking hot *_* I like how Ed is so lost in this, and how plucky and determined Winry is to make it all work.

    The one concrit I have is that the first part of Learning Curves seems rather disjointed - I had trouble following the continuity. It started off with them already done - and then goes into a flashback of the act itself in reverse? But then it proceeds again...it was a bit hard to follow.
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  • From on February 07, 2007
    Lol, I love the way you phrase things. So perfectly! ^^ I enjoyed this chapter (Ch. 6) immensely! :) (:
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  • From ANON - mariantarielle on September 29, 2006
    You are a genius! The way you write these two is so incredibly spot on! I love how the humor and the smexy work together to make this story so utterly fantastic. I can't wait for the next installment! Ahhh... the kitchen. :-D
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  • From ANON - haunted angel (too damn lazy to sign in) on September 12, 2006
    oh my gosh! Poor Ed!... well... poor Winry too, but poor Ed and his being male... Loved the Gravi reference btw.
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  • From ANON - wild seven on August 09, 2006
    This is a really good story so far... alot of the parts are so hilarious that I nearly fall out. :) (:
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  • From ANON - MissWoodford on August 05, 2006
    "Being obsessed with FMA is a gooood thing. Right?"
    Thank you, thank you, thank you for pointing out I'm not alone. After a day with my siblings ragging at me about this, it is heartening to know I'm really not a freak. And it's great to see you back with an update......

    On to the story:
    Edward is dense. Truly dense. Really dense. He can search for the Stone, love his little brother, fight with the Bastard Colonel, dodge Scar and the Homunculi (sounds like a bad emo band name), but he can't say the "O" word. Putz. Are all males such idiots? For all his pretense at sophistication, I bet Mustang can't say it either.

    For an "almost lemon" which just skimmed the surface of the sex Ed and Winry had, chapter 3 is remarkable, I feel like such a clumsy fool when I look at the lemon I have been attempting. Great dialog as always, the pair may seem OOC so some people, but maybe that isn't the case when you realize they NEVER got to this point in the anime, so there is no comparison.
    Maybe later in the manga....
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