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Reviews for Untamed Shadows

By : NoOneGarfield
  • From ANON - Fueryluva376 on November 29, 2006
    Ok, I just wanted to say that I love this story! Who are you going to pair Sheska (spelling?) up with, Falman right? I love that pairing, no one ever writes any though..... at least I can't find any..... But anyhoo, I really hope you continue this story it's a fun one to read! Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Mariam on February 09, 2006
    Thsi isn't bad at all...but I'm confused. Is Winry with Al or Ed? The names keepy changing back and forth....
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  • From butterflysuki on January 20, 2006
    Good so far. Please update soon!
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  • From milky on January 20, 2006
    Okay, I reviewed. Reasonable beginning, though it's really hard to get a feel for the story just yet. I suspect a lot of people haven't said anything yet cause they don't have a solid enough impression to pass judgment...

    Or they clicked away when they realized it wasn't immediately turning to porn. I mean seriously, this is AFFN. If you want real feedback, you'll have to look elsewhere. There are good stories that are up for years here that only get one, maybe two reviews. Holding out for others to tell you how great you are is pretty damn childish. If you believe in your story, then by God, write your story :)
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  • From ANON - Unhappy on January 19, 2006
    I come here expecting a lemon and I get unwarned spoilers.
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 19, 2006
    its a good start ^^
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