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Reviews for Blonde and Black

By : Yarou
  • From ANON - Manda on July 27, 2006
    I look forwards to more ^^ hehe. It just keeps getting better and better
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  • From ANON - arteisroseshadow on July 16, 2006
    This is . . . amazing!
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  • From ANON - little_green_ girl on July 11, 2006
    PLS. I BEG YOU POST THE NEXT CHAPTER QUICKLY! I'm so excited on will happan next!
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  • From ANON - Beca on July 02, 2006
    ...aww, poor Ed. D'= That's so sad. *sniffs* Great writting, but make it less sad!! .___.
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  • From ANON - Amanda Lee Fields on February 13, 2006
    Are you trying to depress and scare us with those sayings before the chapters?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? LMAO

    "Light to Darkness, and Darkness to Light. They both lay within one another. As the dawn shines, shadows are cast, but in the black abyss, the light is hard to find." WTF? LOL XD

    "As life become's shorter, the Darkness seems to grow. And growing, it starts to consume your very soul, until there is nothing left but your empty shell." Ok,I have always had depressment issues (I've even tried to kill myself before) but,damn your scaring me,I actually started to cry for no reason!

    "In the Darkness, you try to reach out and find something to hold onto, but are met with reality as you do. There is no where there, just you." ......my stomach is twisting and turning....... '^';;
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  • From ANON - Amanda Lee Fields on February 13, 2006
    I have a question,do you hate Roy? Because I have always hated him. For some reason,I think I'm actually IN LOVE with Ed,it's just his attitude,personality,and of course the obvious fact that Edward is hot. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Amanda Lee Fields on February 13, 2006
    I read what you said about giggling in Act One:Scene Two,I;m just like that,only I'm not a very good writer,so I usually giggle while reading yaoi,I've always wondered if I was weird for doing that,but then again,I am a schoolgirl,lol. Now I will paste a comment that I did on the last yaoi story I read.


    I hate roy,so I never really cared for RoyxEd,and since I am in LOVE with Edward...I never really can stand reading even a whole chapter at one time,gotta take it in small doses,lol. Plus,it takes away some of the hotness when Edward actually WANTS to have sex with Roy.I liked it so much,I read 2 of the chapters in a roll,and I'm going to read the third one after I'm done with this review! ^_^ One weird thing I noticed is that,even if it's plain out sex,I find yoai funny @.@ I perfer Elricest,EdxAl,or AlxEd (I don't see the diffrence between EdxAl and AlxEd -_-; ) As you can tell,I love using faces! @_@;
    For all you "children aren't mature enough!" people,I'M 11,and as you CAN SEE,I AM A VERY GOOD TYPER,AND I'M VERY GOOD AT GRAMMER! PLUS,I UNDERSTAND THE SERIES AND YAOI SO :P
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  • From ANON - Rag doll on February 11, 2006
    When's da next one coming??

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  • From ANON - Juna on January 31, 2006
    POOR ED!! This chapter was so sad and Roy is just pure evil!!! I must read more. This story is so good! Evil Roy screwing over Ed's feelings! So sad! A few errors here and there but that did not stop the story at all cause it is that good. I cannot wait for the next chapter. *Sniffles* Roy you big evil meanie you raped Ed!!! update real soon!
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 30, 2006
    OMG!!! That was so shocking reading about GASP!! Poor Ed!!! *Pulls the blonde in for a tight hug and cries hard on him* You poor poor sexy love sick guy!! You bastard Roy! Omg i am so hating him this very moment...feel a bit anger over at hawkeye too >> I was so shocked! And the chapter being short! gasp i fell of my chair when it ended there. OMG!! Poor Ed!!! *Cries a river on the blonde* Ed: O_o;;;;;

    I am still shocked! GAH! I don't have the words to express how shocked i am!! You are a cruel cruel yet oh so talented yet cruel author! (Still love your work cause you are writting lovely) Update soon!! *Continues crying and gagging* Ed: -_-;;;;;
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  • From ANON - AnimeFanAtic on January 30, 2006
    Awwww... poor Edo -huggles ed-

    I love your story. PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 29, 2006
    Roy you cruel cruel yet sexy but still cruel man! How can you do that to poor Ed!!?? Cheating on him especially with a woman ewwwwwwwwwww (That is so wrong XD)! Anyways i liked this chapter. Poor Ed. I wonder what shall happen next? Please update soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 28, 2006
    Nuts no smut! Its fine i can wait. *Sits and whisltes waiting for the smut* Well it was a good chapter ^^ Cute when Roy offered Ed to sleep on his lap. Heh. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 26, 2006
    I like it alot! The second chapter the format went all wonky but other then that i like it alot. Please update soon =3
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 24, 2006
    I liked it ^-^6 but I noticed some things. The way you had your pergraphs confused the hell out of me. I thought that would be the end of a sentece but the same sentence was still going on in the other perigraph. You didn't do it in the other chapter though. But besides that I liked it
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