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Reviews for Kindred

By : Bardockgurl
  • From Ava on May 08, 2013
    Oh, I'd be so happy if this was updated one day. So happy, you have no idea even .... :'C
    I would cry tears of happiness instead of the ones of sorry I do whenever I check in to see if this story has been updated.
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  • From Krisness on July 17, 2008
    Dude! That was so freaking hot! I absolutely love your story! Finely written and the sex scenes are to die for! Cant wait for the next chapter! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Wow on April 06, 2005
    LOVE IT! Great story. Oh, I hope that Kakkarot isn't some half-droid half-Saiyan, though. but whatever you do, it'll be great. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dragoness Eclectic on April 07, 2004
    Excellent, juicy lemon in the making! It has a plot, interesting characters, well-written sex scenes, and a hypothetically in-character Bardock. I say "hypothellylly" bee wee we never saw Bardock interacting much with non-Saiyans, hard to say how he'd react to sexy human-looking girl. But your protrayal is very plausible. As for the protagonist, I had my suspicions, but chapter 5 clinched it. In Chapter 1 I initially feared that her real name was Mary Sue, but now that I've figured out who she is, I see that she is quite reasonable. (My other fear as of Chapter 3 was that this was a very weird Buffy crossover, but fortunately it's not that, either).
    If there's a time paradox here, I hope you resolve it in a way that makes sense.

    Well-written, quite readable. Sex scenes that are hot and convincing. And someone else who recognizes that Bardock is a handsome Saiyan! (Though I must ask, if Bardock has had only casual liasons and has no wife, where does Raditz come from? Is he in the future yet? Is he a bastard? I assume Goku is enouenough off in the future to not be relevant to this story, but Raditz is older than Goku, and might be relevant, depending on how far in the past this is set.)

    Finally, when is the next chapter coming out? I would like to read more of this tale.
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  • From ANON - Sean on July 23, 2003
    This fic is one i would recommened to anyone that likes straight lemons. I usually don't say this alot but you've got skills
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  • From ANON - Sean on July 08, 2003
    Omg i can't believe you. After the fic was getting so good yust ust stopped. You better maker sure it's done when i check it next or else.... ( it's good so far)
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  • From ANON - PureSuger on June 28, 2003
    MmmmmBardBardock.....*blinks* Oh, sorry 'bout that...*aham* What I ment to say was this is turing out to be a really interesting fic. I want to find out who and what this women is. Please keep going! Can't wait till the next chap! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kelkel_15 on June 26, 2003
    Hey, I reall ylike your story! There arn't that many fics about the hot Bardoc out there.... keep writing and long live the sexiest character on DBZ!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carla on May 31, 2003
    Well, well... I come nosing around here and look what I find!!! I told you before... I LOVE it!
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  • From ANON - RekkaShinen on May 31, 2003
    I liked it. I will give you some criticism...
    It's great! I love your story, it's a bit long, but hey, that's a good thing.
    The right amount of detail to entice the reader, just enough to tempt them.
    I hope you continue to update because you have a faithful reader in me! I hope
    you check out my InuYasha fics. I have three, you kinda have to read them in order. DW, Frustration, and Revela.
    P.
    Please check 'em out. I have one more thing to say, if you want to, you can add some Japanese words in there. Email me for some words, I don't know a lot of them. I know enough.
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