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Reviews for Under Cover of Darkness

By : happyonna
  • From ANON - Gracie Musica on December 03, 2006
    0_0 That was fabulous!
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  • From ANON - Leilannie on October 23, 2006
    This story is great..It make you wanna see if there's a sequel...hehehe...Good Job!!
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  • From on October 01, 2006
    Dude(tte)... I really like the ending. XD This was a pretty good story, probably better than mine.... but then again, there are alot of stories out there better than mine. Meh... anyway, I liked it just fine. :) (:
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  • From ANON - chikyuu on June 22, 2006
    You're right in one thing: it's crappy.
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  • From ANON - sara on June 15, 2006
    ok i thought that was funny...... yes it was a little bit sick but it made me laugh anyway.... thats some pretty good writing
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  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 09, 2006
    Ohhh, that sneaky Winry! She has BOTh brothers on a string. And who knew Alphonse, sweet, gentle, NON THREATENING Alphonse was such a Casanova? I hope you will update this, wouldn't it be funny if they found out about each other? Ummm, maybe not, Edward is certainly the type to get jealous. But wouldn't he be relieved to know he doesn't have to grit his teeth and stay quiet anymore?
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  • From ANON - Ray on June 03, 2006
    Yeah, the saying goes like this: practice makes perfect. C'mon a rabbit fucks longer than this.
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  • From ANON - ayame on June 03, 2006
    Wow. This was short. I hope Al would last longer than that. Maybe with a guy... ^_^
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  • From greengal48 on June 03, 2006
    I like it. That last little bit with Al's got me giggling. Wicked little Al... ^_^ This was a good story. Short... but really good. Keep writting. You know what they say about practice...
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