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Reviews for Clandestine

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on June 13, 2008
    Great Job! Really descriptive and heartfelt.
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  • From ANON - chayron on June 19, 2006
    This is a bit too sweet for my taste (all those love declarations and whispers…and especially that pre-last line: “My lover, my sweet Juunanagou.” - you’d make yourself a favor if you deleted that “sweet”. Yuck, makes my teeth ache), but it’s really well-written otherwise. I wonder why nobody reviewed it yet.

    You describe things beautifully; well, it does have a bit too sweet taste for me, but everyone has his own taste.

    Well, otherwise I don’t have much what to comment on; it’s not clear what happened and how relationship evolved.

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