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Reviews for DBZ college

By : princeofkronesia
  • From ANON - Kitty on July 16, 2006
    Hey, really great, I think its funny. But can you like, make it run together better?

    you know

    not like

    this?

    it's kinda hard to read it like that, so, can you fix it next time?
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  • From ANON - NJNLOLO on July 15, 2006
    Seems interesting
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  • From ANON - bobo on July 09, 2006
    oh boy where do i start. The only thing i can really applaude is the storyline that was very original. However, u need to flesh out the story a little more Personally i feel that the whole yamchu cheats bluma and she goes to vegeta is a little played out. Be bcareful of ur grammar ifu would like a beta reader just email me.oh and try to make a sex scene soon to keep readers interested. do a little reasearch on collage life to make it a little more in depth


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