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By : TrulyWished
  • From Onyxlight on May 20, 2008
    Oh that was great. They really had Ed going in that one.

    You write a disstressed Ed very well ...KUDOS!!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on January 09, 2007
    My, my... that was gorgeous. I cried.
    ^____________^
    And, I almost hate to say it, but many, many thanks for making use of that newfangled spell check thing.
    There's nothing that annoys me more than poorly-written smut.
    *chu*
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  • From ANON - Hikaru! on January 07, 2007
    Woot! That was Hawt! Especially Roy tied to the chair and helpless. mmm...helpless Roy.... *drools*

    There were some parts where i didn't quite get who was who, and who was being refered to by another character. Rereading a line or too usually cleared it up, but i would suggest less pronouns at times. Maybe try to make sure a sentance with more than 2 'he/him/his' pronouns has a least one character name noun or something... I'm not a writer by any means, so my suggestion might just be crap.

    But yay...smut... dog pile smut even... yay....
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on January 05, 2007
    GAH that was hott
    not that i'd expect anything else
    *total*
    *fic*
    *love*
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  • From ANON - Can-Chan on November 08, 2006
    OH!! I love this!! Most funny thing is that i read this in school with the teacher looking right at me! lol... Beyond awesome, excelent job in keeping the characters in their usual play. XD
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  • From ANON - TwilightHunter on November 08, 2006
    I admit it. I've been stalking you. I've just been too damn lazy to review. Or perhaps it was more that I was too eager to get to the next fic to review the one I had finished reading. Anyways.

    While I'll willingly admit I dislike Havoc being there, it was still damn hot. Ed teasing them for days, everyone calling in sick...all of it was just funny. And hot. I can even accept Havoc being there because it was so hot. ::snicker:: Anyways. Keep up the good work. I'm in love with all of your stories. ^____^
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  • From cuylerjade on November 08, 2006
    *nosebleed*
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartless on November 08, 2006
    OMG, niice, especially on the testing out the positions :P
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  • From ANON - jennfier on November 07, 2006
    ...*crazy fangirl squeeeeee!*....
    *throws self at ur feet* im not worthy! im not worthy!
    ...*is speechless*....
    you are my hero. that trio is just... *guh*...
    and you made a new chapter! omg.
    please oh please entertain the possibility of another chapter..or another something anything with those three...
    *passes out from nosebleed bloodloss*
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