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Reviews for Birthday Suit

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  • From ANON - EmpireFiefAstor on December 29, 2009
    Wow... Just, wow.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on July 13, 2008
    Hey! The second anniversary of this fic is coming up soon! (Yes, I have been stalking this fic for that long!) Any chance that we'll get the long-promised EdRoy chapter for this momentous occasion? :D
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  • From InuGrlRayn on May 04, 2008
    Happy birthday to me indeed. Have I told you how much I adore you? Seriously, I love the thought you put into your writing, all the little details, what everyone is thinking, feeling, just everything.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on October 02, 2007
    ?O_o? Did you update? This story jumped to the top of the list the other day so I thought you'd added the chapter I've been DYING to read! :) Don't tease me like this!! :D I gotta have more yummy RoyEd (or, in this case, EdRoy! w00t! LOL!) lemony goodness!! XD
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From Kuragari75 on September 30, 2007
    ........ god you're evil.... UPDATE!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! *begs*
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  • From ANON - LimeCat on September 28, 2007
    And by Learning Curve, I mean Branded... Hur hurr.
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  • From ANON - LimeCat on September 28, 2007
    NO WAY! I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WROTE BOTH BIRTHDAY SUIT AND LURNING CURVE!!!

    You wrote my two favorite AFF stories??? OH MAH GAWD.

    Write moar please. D:
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on September 23, 2007
    *grins* Glad you liked my terrible jokes and my logo! I hope that the logo (=^.^=) isn't trademarked or anything or I'm in trouble! LOL!! I'm dying to know what you've got swimming around in that noggin of yours! :) I too have a hard time imagining Roy bottoming for anybody (Those MaesRoy and HavocRoy doujinshi just seem so wrong!) because Roy is such a naturally dominant personality. If you can pull this one off, my hat's off to you! :D I can't wait to see Ed on top!! w00t!
    RoyEd forever!! OTP!! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From gaiaoftheforest on September 22, 2007
    I'll freely admit that I'm not an Ed/Roy fan (Ed/Winry and Al/OC forever!). But I really like the emotions and imagery you put in there; I don't have to work at imagining what's going on. Awesome story, write more!
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  • From ANON - LimeCat on September 20, 2007
    Oh dang. I LOVE THIS STORY.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on September 19, 2007
    OMG THAT WAS SO FREAKING HOT!!!! w00t!! :D I wasn't sure there for a minute if Ed would find the confidence to ride the wild Mustang (*snerk* XD I couldn't resist!) but it looks like he's definitly 'up' to the challenge! ;) (I couldn't resist again! LOL) I can't wait!!!! :D
    Please please please please please update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From MustangsHavoc on September 19, 2007
    Dear god are you trying to kill us?!?!?!!? I think my blood pressure rose from reading that! That was so frigging HOT! And unbelivable passonate! It was tangible! Damn I can't wait for the next chapter! In my opinion there is not nearly enough of Roy "getting it" rather than giving it!
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  • From ANON - Bagel on August 20, 2007
    Superbly written! I enjoyed what you've done very much. Your grammar is wonderful and your story flows quiet captively. I look forward to seeing more, if you write it.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on August 17, 2007
    ?? lemon? where? What happened to it? Did I miss it? This was more like "teaser, the extended version" if you ask me. Also, the ending kinda confused me. Roy's busy thinking about what Ed's going to do to him and trying to find the courage to say 'I love you' then there's the line, "The tiny smile, self-satisfied and almost embarrassed at it, when Roy had come at his hands" (implying they'd already done it), then it goes right back to sweaty palmed anticipation of doing it. Unless Roy was thinking of a previous time when he'd cum at Ed's hands, I'm lost. That must be one hell of a long staircase if Roy's got the time to think of all this! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - JungleBunny on August 17, 2007
    You're quite the talented author yourself. For a simple birthday present, this was well written and a kind read. Thanks for offering us a little PW(A)P-I think you were dancing around the fine line between lust, and love the entire time and the tug of war made it not only realistic, but captivating. This was ten minutes well spend, I left with a smile on my face.
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