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  • From crashcrashcrash25 on February 11, 2011
    although it was difficult to imagine Goku like that, this story was still great. It had an awesome plot and was well written. :)

  • From ANON - dragon123 on September 13, 2010
    NOT BAD STORY BUT QUITE NOT MUCH YAOI FOR 90 PERCENT OF THE WORD DESCRIBED A MURDER

  • From Julesie on June 22, 2009
    I absolutely adore this story. I've read it so many times and yet the end still... saddens me. I wanted to know if they ever got together. A sequel would be great but at the same time I can't really see how it would happen. Well... unless there was a twist or plothole you could use ^^;

    I think this is the only actual dbz horror story that was started and completed on any fiction site o.O

  • From Robyn on February 09, 2009
    Wow is right - thank you so much for taking the time to comment inuyasha even though it's been years since this fic was finished.

    Actually with the wish Kakarott made no one would have known of the incidents that happened - except perhaps Shenlong - and he usually doesn't converse with mortals.


  • From inuyasha7885 on January 20, 2009
    WOW! This was really intense! I hated Goku being eveil-but you kept the story so intriging (sp) that I had to keep reading to find out what would happen! Very well written! One question-does anyone ever tell Goku what happened? I would hope not-he'd never be able to live with it! (that's assuming that Mr. PoPo and Dende remember?)

  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2007
    Awww...such a good ending. I did not see that happening. I can't believe that Vegeta had actually died!! But, I'm glad that Kakarotto finally realized his mistake. Even through all the evil inside him he found a way past his saiyajin nature. Greatness! I liked the fact that Mirai Trunks teamed up with the androids. That's a pretty interesting team. And I'm glad that things went back to normal. Though, you do kinda feel bad for Goku that he never got Vegeta in the end, but he's wise enough to know that Vegeta can't "belong" to anyone. So...great story. Loved the absurd violence and gore (every fanfiction needs that :) and the deeper aspects of Goku's character. It seemed like a fun story to write, and I can't wait for the next one. Great stuff!

  • From ANON - Death Note on March 07, 2007
    Oh no, its over. That was a great ending. You should try making an Epilogue or something, or maybe I'm just being greedy but I loved this story. I hope you guys write another one as good because of course I will read. Great job, I'll be looking out for another one. ^_^

  • From Kurochan on March 04, 2007
    This is such a dark ficcy....but so much fun to read! I cant wait for the last chapter!

  • From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2007
    Oh...my...god....AMAZING CHAPTER!! Wow, really awesome. I loved how you wrote 17 and 18. Their attitudes were just so amazingly perfect and calm. So cool. I think I pretty much fell in love with both of them after reading this. And I loved the line at the end, no was ever happy to see them! Haha, really great stuff. Anyway...that fight scene between Goku and Vegeta was really well done. I was sitting in suspense the whole time. I loved Vegeta's desperation to fight against Kakarot, he truly is a confident and strong warrior. I really can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Will 17 ans 18 save the day? Will Gohan be able to fight his father in such a pained condition? And...will Goku ever really get his hands on Vegeta? Oooo....angst. Again, really awesome chapter.

  • From ANON - Tanya Green on February 23, 2007
    Yeah Gohan kick his butt. I like that Gohan has more hidden power in Dragonball GT they didn't show his power.

  • From ANON - Death Note on February 23, 2007
    Wow, who knew seventeen was still around, Nice twist. Update.

  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2007
    Wow, beautifully written chapter. I'm glad to see that Vegeta is remaining calm...for now. I'm interested in seeing how this fight will go between Vegeta and Kakarot. And afterwards, will Vegeta be able to fend him off? And hopefully the dragonballs will be collected in time! Arg! So much to do in such little time. It's getting quite suspenseful and I can't wait to see what happens next! So, again, great chapter!

  • From ANON - Death Note on February 03, 2007
    Very good chapter...can't wait to find out what happens next. Poor Gohan...but especially my poor Vegeta. Update soon.

    And P.S. did I mention that I never really like Mr. Popo, that stupid idiot.

  • From ANON - Sonsofia on February 02, 2007
    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M HOOKED!

  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2007
    Ah, no, you can't stop it there!! So much action, so much suspense! I loved it SO much. I can't wait to see how things will turn out for all the characters. Goku's crazy, Vegeta could possibly became a sex-slave, and Gohan could be killed! Great stuff. I do wonder how Kakarotto will act now that he knows both Gohan AND Vegeta are against him. Please update soon. Wonderific!

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