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  • From ANON - Sonsofia on October 19, 2006
    Oh Goku is positively evil!!! I love it!!!! Such skill at lying, makes me wonder if he's ever done it before. Goku is really obessesed and that's never a good thing. Write more, your loyal readers await!

  • From ANON - Niiro Yuuyake on October 15, 2006
    Wonderful ending sentence. The story is continuing great. I'm liking it more and more. Poor Gohan, he better get that big brain of his, drawing conclusions faster, cause, from what I could tell, his death will be slow and painful...Update soon.

  • From ANON - Death Note on October 14, 2006
    Wow, so he's gonna kill Gohan too? UPDATE!!

  • From ANON - Yuurei on October 14, 2006
    Awesome. I can't wait to see how Vegeta reacts to finding out what happened while he was out. Update again soon.

  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on October 13, 2006
    Aww, I hope he doesn't kill Gohan he is my favorite character ever, but this is my new favorite DBZ story, so do what you must!I hope you all update really soon

  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on October 04, 2006
    Hurray for Pan and ChiChi since they are dead!! I am so glad Goku is not acting like a pussy and the imagery is pretty amazing too! Can't wait for the next update

  • From ANON - Aresy on October 01, 2006
    Those people that didn't like the fic shouldnt read it. Duh goku isn't like that of course not! So what?! Can't he sometimes for christ sakes be the bad guy? lol Hell yah i believe he can. ^_^ OOC doesn't mean that it can't be good. ^_^

  • From ANON - Aresy on October 01, 2006
    hehe lol luv this fic..goku going kinda crazy and killing everyone. Thats what i'm talking about :P Please continue you guys!!

  • From ANON - Macha on October 01, 2006
    Anon,

    I feel I must take a moment to point out the MAIN reason for this work of fanfiction. This was a round robin and was a challenge to all 8 authors involved. My personal genre is not horror, so it was quite a surprise when this story took the turns it did.

    The brightest point to this story (IMO) is that the story finished. I have seen a lot of round robins started, but very few completed. Even with the potential flames this story may generate, I would continue to post this story because of this one remarkable feat.

    I appreciate your concern about plagiarism. That is a horrible plague for any fandom. It is good to know there are folks out there that are willing to stick up for their fellow authors.


    Thank you,


    Macha


  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2006
    After your explanation I must apologize again, it seems that I was wrong. It's just that the idea of this fic it's something you usually don't see at least in this fandom, so I drew a wrong conclusion.

  • From ANON - Agent182 on September 29, 2006
    Anon:
    We accept your apology. We've never heard of this fic you speak of. We wrote this 2 years ago (almost 3 years now) and i assure you, it's nothing like that fic. We're only on the third chapter, it's a coincidence obviously. If you want to point the writer this way so they can take a look, that's fine. The idea has been done (not in this way)- if all the fics that are similar to another fic were taken down, there wouldn't be much to read. thanks for pointing it out thou.

  • From ANON - SonSofia on September 29, 2006
    Oh dear god.... that was absofuckinglutely gory!!! I loved the way you described the deatils, That was great. I love it when Goku loses control. Please commence more killing. And for gods sake UPDATE SOON!!!!

  • From Tyrana on September 29, 2006
    This is very disturbing. I'm totally intrigued by the way Goku's acting, is it due to his obsession with Vegeta or is it anything else? I can't wait for the explanation of such behavior, surely it would be astonishing.
    I have one doubt, is Goku conscious of the terrible things he's doing and of this changes of demeanor or not? And it will be interesting what the reaction of Vegeta will be when he founds out what's happening with Goku.


  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2006
    By the way, I don't want to be unfair, so if I'm wrong assuming that you
    knew the fic 'morbid innocence', then I apologize for my previous comment.

  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2006
    Unoriginal idea, this story has the same argument than the fic 'Morbid innocence' by an author called Celipa, posted at the mail list of Saiyajin secrets three years ago(Oct, 13, 2003): Goku, turned into a pshycho, obsessed with Vegeta, starts killing people, first Chichi, though there he doesn't kill Pan, and Gohan goes to see his father and asked him what he had done after killing Chichi. In this story will Goku try to kill Gohan too like in the original fic?
    I wonder if at least you have asked permission to the author to use her/his idea.

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