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Reviews for Descent

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Cassandra on October 15, 2006
    It's me agayne. . .haha. Started reading this story now =) I lyke it. This chapter was rather hot . . . can't wayte for the next one. I'm really fucking tyred though, and I can't think of anything else to say! But I figured I should at least review!!!
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  • From ANON - pj on October 14, 2006
    Man.......I love this! it's great. You're truly a very good writer.. please continue!
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  • From ANON - KKate on October 13, 2006
    Wow, Mustang surely works fast! I mean, sharing the bed is one thing, jump Ed is another! Not that I´m complaining of course, I was just surprised is all. I came back from a very tiring and stressing day at work to find this steamy sex scene, wow it was really good, thanks. Now I just wanna see how you´re going to work on the rest of the unresolved issues, the angst and all.
    By the way, I LOVE Al and Winry and you´re doing great with them.
    I´m sure this is getting old, but I also have to say that this is the best fma story I read on this site.

    Please continue and thank you for writing.
    Hugs,
    Kk
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  • From ANON - cm34 on October 13, 2006
    that very last paragraph made the rest of the story even better

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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on October 11, 2006
    well, i really am hooked now, i got home from class all wet and tired and this pretty much fixed my night! them boys is takeing their own sweet time getting together, so in charecter... :p
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  • From ANON - Lang on October 10, 2006
    This chapter just made me want to read more and more! You HAVE *if possible of course* XD to write more! You´re a very talented author, your text is well structured and richly descriptive, the emotions are raw and can really touch us.
    Please keep going, because as it was mentioned before, mature and GOOD fics such as yours, are really rare treasures to find.
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on October 10, 2006
    yay updates! gosh, that was pretty angsty... poor Al, sulking at home, at least Ed gets some Mustang, even if he isn't enjoying it at the moment...
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  • From ANON - DK on October 09, 2006
    I just to say that this is a wonderful story and you write beautifully, your characterization is exceptional, I can actually see them acting like this. Your words transmit a lot of emotion and true feelings.
    It´s the best Fma fic I´ve read in a looong time. Thank you for sharing it with us. And I am extremely anxious to read more.
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on October 09, 2006
    very good story, depressing and angsty, but in a good way. and good call on the random japanese words thing, thats kinda annoying. i hope you keep writing because now im all hooked...
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  • From ANON - bunny_no_hoogle on October 08, 2006
    another amazing chapter. I love the dream sequence. Once again, I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kumiko on October 07, 2006
    very good story! can't wait to see what happens!! X_X i wanna see! please!
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  • From bunnynohoogle on October 06, 2006
    This is a wonderful story! You are a very talented and descriptive writer. I don't believe I've ever read a FMA fic quite like this one. I can't wait for the next chapter! *many many kudos for the amazing story*
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