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Reviews for Like Father, Like Son

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - Stargirl on October 20, 2014
    I wish this was based on only Goku and Bulma fanfic and not gohan as i am a huge fan of goku/bulma. But please write more stories of goku/bulma im waiting. i have a request, i cant read the story another side to z which is also based on bulma/goku. i think its been taken off. can you bring it back.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2006
    good
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  • From ANON - Catie on November 26, 2006
    mmk
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2006
    A LOT BETTER!!!! BRAVO!! A few spelling mistakes but a great change overall. I like it more now, it was very hot. I'm glad you did this, now let's see, you put this up not to long ago, so there's plenty of time for people to review. Now, be patient because a lot of people go to ff.net to read what is already here and don't always come here to review. If this is on ff.net, you have a better chance at getting more reviews. This is good and at least you revised it at all. Keep up the good work and spit out some more fics!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2006
    Uhh, this is good, but it was rushed and could have included more detail. And the tenses... you have to get them right or it will make the reader think you're too young for them to waste their time reading your fic. Fix this and reupload it, I think you will get better results. That's not a guarantee, but you could try. But I like the pairings, nice one. Those are rare, so it's good someone wrote more. Fix the grammar mistakes and write some more fics. I for one would like to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - NJNlolo on October 31, 2006
    You should write more stuff.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2006
    great lemon
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