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Reviews for Deal

By : TrulyWished
  • From gaarasTakara on November 16, 2007
    i like it it has a good plot , your way better than i am ...lol i didnt even get a scene done when i wanted to write one ..lol so congrats , i really likes it
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  • From Afrieal on June 10, 2007
    ooooOOOOOOOooooooooohhhhhhhh my that brought back memories thank you now we both have to see if we can find our collars and supprise our mates tommorow *snicker* have a good one

    Affie and Rysha
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  • From ANON - . on December 28, 2006
    hot
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on December 21, 2006
    that was awesome. *nomme gives trulywished a standing O* don't worry, just something my insane friends at university do :P this was totally hot, but the way ed was so frightened had me worried. of course i should have known that things would be different than my warped little imaginings in the end.

    i can't wait till your next work!
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  • From ZaKai on December 20, 2006
    I liked it. I thought it was really yummy. *chuckles* I'm not really much into spanking, but you really sparked my interest. I really liked how Roy said something like how he thought Ed did it on purpose because he was sure Ed liked it.

    Grammar and spelling wise, it looked pretty good, although there was one typo on the biginning of the fifth paragraph that totally jumped out at me. This is what you have: He was jerked back to pressed against the strong

    Other than that, the spelling and grammar was good. ^___^

    I'd leave you a longer review, but my laptop is about to die. T_T Again, nice story.

    - Z
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  • From ANON - Danielle Anderson on December 17, 2006
    That was hot!
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on December 17, 2006
    well, you've really done it, that managed to be hot, dirty, and fucking ADORABLE all at once. it was really perfect D/s fantasy, and now i am composed soley of love for it
    *mmmm*

    -??
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  • From ANON - jennifer on December 17, 2006


    *DED*

    that was......just....*guh*
    spanking! omg yes! so wonderful.
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  • From ANON - milky on December 16, 2006
    *_* Roy was whipping Ed for being a bad boy. DSFARGAG. That was so, so very tasty.


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