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Reviews for You Belong to Me

By : squallstorm
  • From LadyRonin on October 22, 2007
    not only still reading but anxiously awaiting the next chapter. i can't wait to see how roy acts when he meets russell.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on October 20, 2007
    I'M STILL HERE! Hehe, sorry I'm a bit silly tonight. That was another fantastic chapter and I can so feel the tension building up between Roy and Ed and it is so delicious! I like how Ed's feeling are slowly changing under his nose, and how Roy is way more attracted to Ed then he is willing to admit to himself. I'll be eagarly awating the next chapter! Much review love!
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  • From radcat on October 20, 2007
    Glad you updated. This is one of my favorite stories. I think the chapter was fine. I liked the interactions between Roy and Ed. Their relationship needs time to grow. We need to see what makes them themselves and so we will be able to appreciate it when they grow and change later. Face it...Roy needs to learn how to be more human and, in the movie, Linus learned this from Sabrina. Roy needed to see the martial arts aspect of Ed and to see him more of a grown up. Besides we need Ed to get to LA. Ed vs Scar....now that is going to be a battle. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From alleycat88 on October 20, 2007
    YAY! You updated! Awesome chap! Mustang is such a conniving bastard! I Love it!
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  • From Valerie22 on October 02, 2007
    Oh God you are killing me with this. One on My favourite movies is Sabrina( both Juliette Binoche and Audrey Hepburn versions. I love this story you are writing , please continue .
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  • From MustangsHavoc on October 02, 2007
    Oh god! I didn't think we would get some Roy/Ed so soon but then we did! SQUEE! Another great chapter! Poor Roy! How could Ed hit his pretty face? Ooooo! The plot is getting so thick and juciy! Winry vs Roy over Ed! It can't get much better than that! I feel so bad for Al, I'm glad he wasn't there to see that. I can't wait for chapter 12!
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  • From Yaoigirl69 on October 02, 2007
    Oh WoW!!!! This is my favorite part of this movie! I can't wait to see how you make it in to RoyxEd. Everything you have done so far has been very creative and interesting. I am loving your twist on this story! XD
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  • From sasquatchsnake on October 01, 2007
    I'm a huge fan of this story. The character developement is great and I've been looking forward to see where you're headed with the plot.

    Seriously, it totally makes my day.
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  • From radcat on October 01, 2007
    Another good chapter. I like your version of Sabrina. Well, that evening certainly ended on an interesting note. Roy and Pinako can be quite cruel but then they are rich and used to having their own way in everything. Roy needs to lighten up and Scar is out there somewhere. Can't wait for the next chapter. Glad you updated.
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  • From ANON - toshima on October 01, 2007
    I really enjoy reading this story. Your Roy and Ed are really great. Please Keep going
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!! EDWARD, DON'T FALL FOR IT!!! SHE JUST WANTS YOU FOR YOUR BODY!!! PICK ROY INSTEAD!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From LadyRonin on September 18, 2007
    that was a slick the way you had roy recognize ed and winry didn't. this story is so the shit to me. even though it's taken a while for us to get to it i just know the next chapter is going to have some slick old roy and ed action. i can't wait for the next update.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on September 10, 2007
    That chapter was delicious! I don't know how else to describe it! Oh no! Please don't let Ed fall for the temptation of Winry, let Roy get to him first! And besides, think of poor Al? You wouldn't do that to poor sweet Al would you? Roy! Oh Roy! Please keep that sister of yours in line.

    Not that we can blame her, Ed is a stud.
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  • From ANON - Orion117 on September 06, 2007
    What a treat to be able to read a new chapter in each of your stories tonight! This was a really good one. Ed has really grown up to be able to realize that having a physical relationship with Russell when he can't love him is not fair to Russell in the long run. That part of the chapter was very well written. I also liked Ed's letter to his Da. Very touching, and showed how he has matured. And now that he's back home, the real fun begins! I wanted to yell at him to run away from Winry, though. She's not the one for you, Ed! Oh, well, I suppose he has to get her out of his system. I liked the way you wrote him in the scene with her, though. He kept up the cool and confident "man of mystery" pose as long as he could, and then he got home and it all caught up with him, and he dashed away. Pretty funny. I also liked that Roy recognized him right away.
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  • From ANON - Tati on September 05, 2007
    Alright! Ed is finally home and we can have some Roy and Ed ACTION!!!

    I loved the Sabrina movies (both of them) and I never imagined using the storyline for this. I love it, especially since it is Roy and Ed.

    Don't take too long to update this story, pretty please. **bats eyelashes**
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