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By : ursweetheartless
  • From Chichiriskoi on September 09, 2008
    That was...wow! Are you ever gonna continue this?
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  • From on January 12, 2007
    I liked that, very well done and comedic in some areas. It was also nice how you sorta kept him in character in bits of it. Very nice. ^^
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on January 04, 2007
    Well, you've certainly set it up for a sequel where Roy overheard Ed and invites himself in. If you do a sequel, I'll look forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Demyx's_Sitar_Girl on January 03, 2007
    Owww.... Im Guessing Automail Up The Ass Would Hurt. Lol. Good Story Its The First FMA Story Ive Read On This Site Great Job.
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  • From ANON - feriwiccan on December 24, 2006
    *crazy fangirl*

    Tres hawt! I would love to see a sequel to this! :) There can never be enough RoyxEd in the world... and this is only the second or third fic I've read that has Edo actually getting off the man! The world needs more solo!Edward!!! Kudos and awesome job!! I really like your writing style as well; it's descriptive but not overly so. This is usually pretty hard to accomplish!

    PS: If you would like, I could beta for you. You know, read over and fix minor typos/gramatical mistakes. Just a thought. Send me an email!
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  • From ZaKai on December 23, 2006
    wow, very hot! I loved your descriptions, they were so good that I could really imagine what was happening. Very nice work. This is great by itself but I'm sure a sequel would be good too. *looks forward to that*

    - Z

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  • From ANON - pun_xy on December 23, 2006
    Wow, please continue this. Roy's just gotta have him!

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  • From ANON - Danii The Muse on December 22, 2006
    -dies of major blood loss from the nasal cavity-

    That was beautiful, hun. Geez, so hot!
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on December 20, 2006
    Purrrrr, yummy.
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  • From on December 20, 2006
    *drool* Oh yesyesyes~ This was lovely! :D

    Something though: rapping his fingers tightly around it... - You meant 'wrapping'

    There were a few other typos, just things like wods being squished together and the wrong version of words being used, but it's nothing a quick look-over or beta wouldn't catch. ^^


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  • From ANON - cryo on December 20, 2006
    Mmmmmmm Ed/hand OTP for the fucking win. I like how very sensual this is, we have all the little details. I can almost feel the heat of the shower versus the uncomfortable tiles.
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