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By : Echo13moon
  • From MasamuneBlade on June 12, 2009
    chapter 2: again, this whole thing is a diamond in the rough. the thoughts/counter-thoughts/dialogue run together uncomfortably. grammar mistakes a plenty. but there's something here that's incredibly engaging, very fulfilling to read. the characterizations are a little over-dramatic sometimes, but other times they fit perfectly (Duo with the knife leaning over Wufei, then when he's shocked that Wufei is concerned about him, not himself). really, i'm so torn with this whole thing. it's like i love it in its essence, but i want you to tear it to pieces and start from scratch because i know you can do better. still, i'll keep reading. i'm enjoying it, that's for sure.
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  • From MasamuneBlade on June 11, 2009
    chapter 1: it's a little too... fast paced? bit too much 'stream of consciousness'. i feel like i can't stay with the train of thought all the time. i do like the premise, even amidst the '5 g-boys in a safehouse' standard backdrop. you do some really good things with description. i'll keep reading, bit by bit. i did enjoy the first chapter, that's for sure.
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  • From CeeCee on June 04, 2009
    I think this is one of my new favorite stories. I love all the complex emotions between each of the pilots. And can I just say the Trowa/Quatre/Heero threesome is hot? The scene in the back of the cop car made me shiver in a nice way.

    A few chapters ago when Heero and Trowa were just gently stroking Duo's scars was unnerving. It was such a beautiful image at first, until all of the sudden Duo reacted so violently to it, when you suddenly realized this was a guy who couldn't tolerate that, where even that gentle affection, physically, felt like a violation. If the circumstances had been different, if he hadn't been traumatized, that scene would have been really, really sensuous. But it was still intimate, just hearing him explain where each scar came from, and seeing them be so concerned about him.

    This story is gorgeously done. More, please.
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  • From Minamino on June 04, 2009
    Echo! You're back! Hooray! ^_^

    Sadly, it's getting late. I'll try reading and reviewing this sometime soon.
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  • From ImmaculateEden on June 17, 2008
    This story is really great. I really like it! I'm a huge Wufei fan. I really hope that you continu it.

    P.S. I also really liked the part in the cop car. ^_~
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  • From In2lalaland on April 18, 2008
    *happy sigh* This story really is lovely. I think your damaged!Duo is fantastic. Very well done!
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 11, 2008
    HALLO! It is I, Jen of the Chibi-Pa/Megacon. The new chapter is 100% lovely. I can't wait for some action :rubs hands: But this is also angsty. Angsty has to work up to it, I know, I know. XD
    Hope you update again sooooon!
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  • From kallipso on February 21, 2008
    wow you updated I love this chapter please keep it coming.
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  • From In2lalaland on September 25, 2007
    Yay! Another chapter! Lovely, lovely story. Raw and harsh with a bit of romance. Just the way I like it. Long live the 2x5!
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  • From Shear on September 09, 2007
    Is there more to come? This is such delicious fiction. I loved this latest chapter with those nice policemen and all those weapons. Please update soon.
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  • From HavocTellenoi on September 02, 2007
    Om my god, it's great. And it so needs to have more added to it. please say that it has more chapters coming. it's been so hard to find good new fanfics on GW since the series was aired a long time ago. It's nice to see a good fanfic pop-up and grab my attention. Love the imagery and hte multiple layers of plot. very well done and tasty too. ^_^
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  • From Dragon7 on August 31, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From hpfan on July 29, 2007
    great story!! please keep writing. i want more of duo's past !!! more!!!
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  • From mousemaxwell on June 11, 2007
    only you would try to do both try a credit card it works sometimes to pick a lock.

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  • From Dragon7 on April 16, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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