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Reviews for The More I Learn to Care For You: Ed's POV

By : squallstorm
  • From MustangsHavoc on September 13, 2007
    WAHAAAAAAAAAAAA! How can you do this! Evil clifhanger deamonesses! Fight Ed fight! Don't let Roy push you away because he has issues!

    Oh! As much pain as this causes me I love it! I thought this was going to be fluffy and it got so heavy and good!

    I so have to go read what's going on in Roy's head now!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2007
    ^^ this is so cool! i look foreward to seeing where you go with it!
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  • From eeriansadowthefallen on September 10, 2007
    review for chapter 7

    very intense and tragically beautiful. i read the roy POV first, so my emotionswere already blasted raw and i think i may have missed some of the impact (usually i read them in the opposite order, with ed POV first), but this was still intense enough to make me feel a little sick while reading the dialogue between them at the end.

    wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on September 09, 2007
    O_o? Whoa. You changed the text type. Kinda threw me there for a minute. :) I know I reviewed this at ff but I just wanted to throw you some more encouragement to keep going! I love this fic!!! :D YAY!! *throws confetti* XD I don't think I mentioned it in the other review but it was funny that Ed was put in the children's ward to recover! He's too bad off right now to fully realize where he is but when he does I'm sure he'll be more than a little pissed off. It'll be just one more thing to ruin his day. With Roy abandoning him like this (I've already threatened Roy for his behavior. How dare he do this to Ed!!), having the fact that he is still considered a kid thrown in his face will just make him feel even worse. poor guy. I hope he didn't hurt himself any more than he already is when he fainted there at the end of the chapter! ;_; I hope Roy and Ed manage to fix things between them and get back together where they belong! I don't expect any fluff for them but a happy ending would be nice! Is that too much to ask for? I don't think so. :) ZaKai is such a meanie for torturing them so! LOL XD
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From edsgirl1959 on September 05, 2007
    Both points of view are writen very good. Please don't stop this, and I'm hoping against all hope that Ed survives this somehow.
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  • From ANON - Macarena on August 27, 2007
    Please!!! I want to read more!!! It`s very good!! And so sad (snif!!!) Make a happy end!!! Well, just keep writing, you both. Lucky in your lifes....and write!!
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  • From ANON - Andi on August 23, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!!! HOW could you two end it there!!!!!! >< You guys HAVE to update soon. I am DYING here. Okay deep breath... Ok so I REALLLY REALLY like this fic (as you can porbably tell). Not only is there an actual plot line (which I see so rarely these days) but it is also written wonderfully!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon or I swear I will go insane... or more insane than I already am.
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  • From ANON - basilika on August 21, 2007
    Since the first that i came across with was Ed's POV, i'm always reading this first. Your Ed makes a sketch of the situation and messes everything out, and then I go to Roy to see the whole picture, to sort eveything out and clear it. It feels like being part of a game where you play a ball game on your own - you have to be ready to catch it on both sides.
    I still need to finish reading ZaKai's ch6 - Roy owns me an explanation, hehe.

    All in all - good idea, keep going, good luck, dying to read more.
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  • From anapana83 on August 10, 2007
    Wow, miscommunication up the wazoo here! Geez. Poor Ed and Roy. That accident was well written you know. And the feelings that go through one's minds during relationships is so true its scary. I read Roy's POV too. You guys did an excellent job! Be proud of yourselves. Update soon!
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  • From Afrieal on August 10, 2007
    we're giving you and your cohort the same review
    AAARRRGGGHHH!!!!! that's meaner than usual. please come up with the next chapter soon!!!!

    Affie and Rysha
    whimpering pittifly
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  • From ANON - Christina on August 09, 2007
    i shall hate you if ed does not live!!! :O
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  • From MustangsHavoc on August 03, 2007
    I LOVE this! It is so darling! I HAVE to go read Roy's point of view now! But I have to admit I'm rather partial to stories from Ed's point of view. I just love how real this is, and how stubborn they both are! ZaKai and you are both fantastic authors and I allways look forward to more from you both!
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  • From Afrieal on July 27, 2007
    oh great gods of the universe... you've got another great chappie on your hands... Rysh and i were commenting so loudly we woke up the rest of our households (speakerphones need better volume controls) keep up the great work and more please... we can't wait to read the counterpart.

    Affie and Rysha
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on June 13, 2007
    *GASP!!!* Ed threw away all his research on Roy?!?!? He hasn't given up has he? Oh Ed. *hugs Ed* Ed's trying so hard and Roy is making this so difficult. He gets a quick kiss and a grope from Roy and then Roy acts like nothing happened. I love Roy dearly but the man can be such a jackass sometimes. I can't help but think that Ed is going about this all wrong. He's trying to analyze this too much. Roy told him earlier that this experience would be trial and error. There are no really right or wrong answers. Ed, being the scientist that he is however, wants everything to be perfect but it just can't be so. The poor guy is tearing himself apart trying to do the impossible. I mean honestly, would it kill Roy to drop a few hints/pointers about what a "successful date" should be - i.e. what he would like? something? anything? Come on, Roy, throw the kid a bone! (no pun intended I swear! XD)

    *smiles* Ed was so adorable with his pad and pencil asking the office ladies (i.e. floozies) about Roy! It took a lot of courage to face that group of hussies all by himself! XD BTW, how old is Ed in this story anyway? You mentioned that Al has his body back but that doesn't really tell me a whole lot. He was acting like a little kid when he hid the papers from Roy. And Lord love him but he's moody as hell! PMS anyone? *ducks under desk* Sorry, Ed, you know it's true! :) Anyway, I was just wondering.

    It worries me that Ed's not eating. He's gonna make himself sick doing that and it'll be all Roy's fault for torturing him like this. I hope he'll be OK. I also hope he finds the inspiration to get this date over and done with before it worries him to death! :) Like I told ZaKai, it'll be Valentine's Day is in three weeks and I don't think either one of them will survive this drought that long! :) It might take that long for Ed to get over being mad at Roy though. Valentine's Day would be a good day for them to get back together. (Yeah I know it's cheesy and trite but it is what it is. Sometimes corny's not too bad.) At this rate, either the sexual frustration or one of them saying or doing something stupid will tear them apart. I'd hate for that to happen. The mixed signals and misunderstandings are killing me! It breaks my heart that Ed thinks Roy is cheating on him. T_T
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From nomdeplume on June 13, 2007
    Poor Ed. It's really a shame these two can't manage to communicate better. Also, for some reason, the Eep! made me snicker.
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