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Reviews for The More I Learn to Care For You - Roy's POV

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 30, 2009
    *growls* Dammit! I hate it when aff chops half my review off! grrr! sonofabitch! *throws rocks at aff*

    This part posted - "^_^ I love this fic! The end of this chapter was just win! Roy finally admitted to himself that he really does love Ed and made plans to spend some time together!", and the rest of it, as best I can remember, was, "There's hope for them yet! You know of course that I'm now (im)patiently waiting for the next chapter and their (happy) reunion!"

    *sigh* It kinda loses something when ya gotta repeat yourself. :P
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 30, 2009
    ^_^ I love this fic! The end of this chapter was just win! Roy finally admitted to himself that he really does love Ed and made plans to spend some time together!
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  • From ANON - radcat 38 on February 18, 2009
    Just read chapter 11 and am so happy that Roy is starting to figure things out especially his feelings regarding Ed. Too bad his career is not going too well right now but it is looking like those anger management classes are working for him. Maybe those years during and after Ishbal took a large piece out of Roy and maybe those classes were part of what he needed to get back to himself. Glad he told Ed he loved him and is willing to try and work things out. I am a little worried that he started drinking again. We will see where this goes. Am off to read Ed's POV. PS Hope Roy does not get into trouble for leaving town and does make it back to Central in time.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on February 12, 2009
    Wonderfull chapter!) Looking forward to reading what happens when Roy and Ed meet again.
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  • From IrishMoon7 on January 22, 2009
    Sorry, I'm not sure if you can see it, so my e-mail is irishmoon7@gmail.com . I really hope you're continuing this!
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  • From IrishMoon7 on January 22, 2009
    I just wanted to say that I really love this story. I think the characterization is great, and the plot is very immersing. I really hope that you two haven't abandoned these and if it's not too much trouble, I would love to be added to the e-mail updates. It seems kinda silly, since it'll be the exact same review, but Im off to review for kikiko now, Keep up the awesome work! Please?
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  • From ANON - radcat on November 16, 2008
    I meant "chances" at becoming Fuhrer. I really need to sleep and get off the interent!
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  • From ANON - radcat on November 16, 2008
    Wow...poor Roy. Demoted to a Lt. Col. and probably losing all changes at being Fuhrer. Hakuro really needs to get a life and stop being jealous of Roy. Have not read Ed's side yet but wonder what his take and actions will be on learning of Roy's punishment and how his words were twisted to increase it. Nice though to see Roy finally coming to terms and peace with the knowledge of his actions and why and the fact that he loves Ed. Roy seems to be emotionally maturing and ready to see what place Ed has in his life. Al was soooo cool. I love protective killer brother Al. The one thing in fanfiction that everyone agrees on is that when nice sweet brother Al becomes angry he becomes hell on wheels and when it is to protect his big brother...wow. I knew that remark Roy made to Ed about Al hating himn was going to rebound big time on him. It was a good thing for Roy that Al is reasonable and only wants what will make Ed happy. So Ed loving Roy probably kept Roy safer than if he was Ed's enemy. Thanks for the update. Love this story. I remember when it started a few years ago around the holidays and I was in Conneticut working for awhile. It really helped me pass the time. Thanks.
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 11, 2008
    Someone really needs to slap Hakuro!!
    Love the update and I really feel for Roy but he did kinda deserve most of that. Look forward to the next chapter XD
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  • From ANON - briryan on November 11, 2008
    great chapter. I can't wait to read Roy's reaction of being demoted to lieutenant colonel. That should be interesting. Oh what will he tell Ed? Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Reese on September 20, 2008
    Wow... this is a great story! I need more. Can you add me to your update list? Thanks!

    Reese

    mariuspretty at yahoo dot com
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  • From DuosAngel on September 07, 2008
    Aw man, I was hoping this was finished when I started it. Then again, I'm glad it isn't finished. This is without a doubt the absolute best FMA fic I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter! It's just so perfect! Please update again soon!

    Please also add me to your update list. DuosAngel02@yahoo.com
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  • From yellow22 on September 01, 2008
    ch 1-9 great story. Please continue.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on May 26, 2008
    Al IS such a badass! Him beating up on Roy is made of so much win! Roy had it comming anyways. If not for Ed's sake then all the jilted lovers out there!
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 26, 2008
    oh so good. I hadn't read these before so I just spent an amount of hours I'd rather not admit reading one chapter of Ed's POV and then one chapter of Roy's. These are really good and after realising just when you started this (which by the reviews was a year ago OMG) I know it must take a lot of work and effort just to finish one chapter. I love how you've given Roy some vunrabilities, he always acts so casual and sure of himself and now he falters ocasionally which is nice 'cos it makes him seem human.
    I was going to add the seemingly obligatory update soon but I know these take forever to write and you have other stories to do too (which I also read and love) that I'll just say thank you for posting what you have so far and I'll wait nice and patiently for the next chapter of both POV's.
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