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Reviews for Breaking Havoc

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  • From Mortimer on May 21, 2008
    YAY!!! UPDATE!!!! *dances* It was a good one too. Can't wait for you next post!!
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  • From VampireHaku on May 21, 2008
    You have no idea how happy I got when I saw you updated this :). I reread the whole thing before reading the new chapter, so much drama, I love it! Please post the chapter sooner :( it about killed me waiting for this one, no joke! Can't wait for the lemon ;D seriously, gonna love it so much... you're a brilliant writer :).
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  • From ANON - Anise on May 19, 2008
    So nice to see an update from you it's been awhile :) It looks like things just keep going from bad to worse for Havoc, but Mustang was rather sneaky about trying to find things out, unfortunately it'll probably be too late to stop what may be about to happen. The mind games that Archer has been playing with Havoc add a really great twist to the story, he's got Havoc to the point where it's not going to take much to break him, unfortunately I'm guessing that's all going to happen next chapter.
    Such a wonderful story and I can't wait to read the next update ^_^
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  • From ANON - Melissa on May 15, 2008
    Thanks for the update! You are such a wonderful writer, I look forward to more of this story.
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  • From Lavinia on May 15, 2008
    OOH! you updated! I'm soooo happy. I like how this is progressing, like not getting straight to the real rape, but dealing with other kind of harassment first... Sadly enough, many start with the rape, it often leaves a story a bit hollow. And I really like how you portray Mustang, very believable. Good work! I'll be eagerly waiting for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2008
    ZOMG!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe archer is being nice..... but his motives are evil.. and cunning. Well i cant wait for the next update!!!!
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  • From Mortimer on April 25, 2008
    Love it! The long waits in between updates are worth the wait. I want to see Roy save Havoc-sama so badly. My favorite chapters so far are the first two; when Frank beats Jean and when Jean goes home for the first time. Both were very well written. But I really really really loved the part when Roy saw straught through Havoc in I believe chapter 3 when he showed consern for him and brought up Hughs. Nearly broke my heart! I understand that life gets in the way sometimes but if you could up date soon!
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  • From queenofneworleans on March 27, 2008
    pppppppllllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeee update this story.
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  • From Merkswinter on February 17, 2008
    Wow...LOVE THIS STORY!
    I raced through the thing and now I can't wait until the next installment!
    As everyone else is saying POOR HAVOC! Aww the little man's gone through alot hasn't he.
    Burn Archer!
    Also can't wait until the RoyxHavoc pairing:)
    ACE!
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  • From yellow22 on February 15, 2008
    new chapter soon?

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  • From ANON - melissa on February 04, 2008
    oh I love this story but please say you will update again soon!!!! I cant wait to find out what else poor Havoc will have to undure and if Mustang will find out and what he will do!!! ^_^ I just love your story!
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  • From VampireHaku on February 04, 2008
    I am SO glad you updated this. I saw and squeeled so loud my mom asked if something was wrong XDD. Oooo I can't wait for the actual rape to commence, I'm highly anticipating it. I'm also anticipating Roy finding out and his reaction, oooo thats gonna be good. I hope you update as quickily as you can, I went nuts waiting for this chapter, no joke @_@. Great story here!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on February 02, 2008
    Poor Havoc, people sure do love to abuse the poor guy in fics don't they?

    I love this story, it's very realistic, and your Archer is beyond slimey. (I like my villians truly, truly evil.)


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  • From ANON - KakashiSanzo5790 on February 02, 2008
    YAY! You updated!
    I'm in love with Breaking Havoc!
    It's an amazing story with a wonderful plot so far....XD
    I can't wait until you get to the RoyxHavoc pairing...XD
    Thank you for writing and please try to update soon!
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  • From yeagerbomb on February 01, 2008
    i forgot to say: i was worried about this, and i'm so glad you updated! you were gone for so long! i hope the next chapter comes out soon!~
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