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Reviews for Blind Obsession

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Lovely Spell on October 15, 2008
    Awesome! ^_^ I'm so glad it ended the way it did. It was realistic and nice. I would have hated an 'i love you' 'i love you too' ending. Awesome really. Thanks for sharing!

    ja
    LS
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  • From Afrieal on October 15, 2008
    Coolies you updated *grin* Af was squeeling the house down when she saw *laugh*. oh and Yamma-Jii sends gretings. I can't wait to see what you've done. it's great to see a roy ed where they don't end up sappy lovesick fools or are really over the top in the angst factor ya know. there are few out there that have the right ballance i've only seen about three or four authors that have the ballance right. (Af just yelled that she's not one of those she's either sickly sweet or angst up the wazoo and is sticking her tongue out at me). Keep up the great work looking foreward to the epilogue
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  • From ANON - Sam-chan on October 12, 2008
    (LadyMisaga@yahoo.com) It's been a while since I read this story. Several chapters later I realized I didn't leave a comment or review. So here goes.
    I've been following this from the beginning maybe left some comments under Azumi-chan. But this story is really well written and the characters and pov's are excellent. My heart clenched at Ed losing his sight, he's lost so very much and he is my favorite character from FMA because he has so much strength, but I can't help but feel heartache for him for how much he has suffered. I am glad that he finally realizes that his 'lover' is Roy and hope they can make amends because they are great for one another. They complete each other and have more in common than either of them realize. I am deeply entranced and into this story and greatly look forward to an update. Thoroughly happy that Al and Ed have made amends the two of them have always been together and them being ripped apart is something that breaks my heart. I could rant about how much I understand Ed's devotion to Al and how he views him as his foundation but I won't bore you with that. Thank you ever so much for updating this story and writing such a wonderful, insightful, emotional, and moving story. Sorry for the lack of reviews, I'll try to rectify that throughout the remainder of the story. Gomen^^;
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  • From on October 10, 2008
    *yanking on my hair with both hands* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 12 chapters!!! 12! and i am still so addicted to this story! it should be a damn crime to do this!!! what is this hun? loveless you have to wait a month or two for the next book! *falls in a crumpled heep* ugh plz review asap for my damn sanity!its terribly like heroin one time and your hooked try and get off it and you shake.....
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  • From ANON - Gaara_yami on October 04, 2008
    please oh please email me when you get the new chapter up, I've been checking for weeks!! I love this so much I can barely wait!
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  • From KayceHurd on October 01, 2008
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    love the story u made me cry
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  • From on September 24, 2008
    ZOMG!!!
    I just started reading this and...
    -is hot in teh pants-
    OMG YOU HAVE SUCH A WAY WITH WORDZES!!!!
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  • From yellow22 on September 23, 2008
    ch 12 anxiously waiting for more. Please?!?
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  • From ANON - Dani on September 11, 2008
    Hey great story! I absolutely love the way you portrayed Ed. I would like to be on your email alert list too becuase this is just an amazing story. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Read on September 05, 2008
    I love this story!!! Can't wait for your next chapter. I always want to know what is going to happen next. Please put me on your e-mail list: wpalmerdrama@yahoo.com
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  • From Nenshogin22 on September 05, 2008
    omfg!!!!! gah!!! so short!!!! update soon ne? man i know im impatient but omfg love ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss plzzzzzzzzzzzz update!!!!
    im probably getting annoying by now but hey least it should motivate u ...(hopefully)

    cant wait for the next update *smiles*
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  • From ANON - radcat38 on September 05, 2008
    Chapter 12---I like! I love how wrote the two brothers making their peace with each other. You stayed true to their characters and kept their familial bond even though they are changing while they age. Their banter was so them (especially Al reminding Ed that Al was not so innocent because he grew up with Ed the vulgar). Glad they reconciled. Mustang needs to come to terms with his feelings for Ed and his actions. He really needs to see things really through Ed's eyes...(nothing intended). Poor Ed...hope he can to terms with his own feelings etc for Mustang. Ed was on his last day! at the lab...not fair. Wonder what his future will be. Glad you updated. Thanks. (Sorry for the lame review...way too tired but had to read the update before I get some sleep...if they do not call me out to work again.)
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  • From ANON - wantingmemories on September 05, 2008
    Great chapter. It felt real.

    A minor point, because I know you seem to be very diligent about this: you have "site" written, but it should be "sight." I am sure you are aware of what is correct, but we all have typos. The fragment below is where that oversite (hehe) is.

    "It was just so frustrating that he didn’t know. He hadn’t realized just how much he’d had—how important his 'site' was—until it was gone. It had always been there and he’d just taken it for granted... Just like Al..."

    Thanks so much for your great stories.



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  • From ANON - kagecat on September 05, 2008
    this is such and intriguing story it's ridiculous. Not only is there hot sex, but there's a plot, and angst! X3 i
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  • From SarahTaylor on September 04, 2008
    Yay, they're friends again.

    I'd leave a more intelligent review but I'm half asleep and typing on auto pilot. I just love your writing, it's always so intuitive and flows beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to know what happens between Ed and Roy XD
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