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Reviews for Pyrometallon

By : CrimsonLantern
  • From Kuromei on August 29, 2007
    Oh noes! Things were getting good and Ed's leg had to give out! DX Oh well, let's hope it's something Ed can fix on his own without Winry killing him. X3
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on July 08, 2007
    Hi! The watching the sunset scene was great! It was so sweet how Roy and Ed could have that moment in time to be normal like everyone else. I got a little nervous when they met Maes and Gracia in the park! Nothing gets past Maes! :) That man's got the eyes of a hawk! :D I hope that Ed's learning how to cook won't be too big of a disaster. It should prove interesting no matter how bad it turns out to be! :) I don't get why people like having sex outside. All the grass, bugs, dirt, sticks, etc etc - yuck. The thrill of getting caught is one thing (and a great thing it is! Fun with food is too!) but having to deal with all the icky stuff like dirt and bugs just takes the excitement out of it. What's wrong with Ed's leg? I'd been wondering when it would finally give out on him. Uh oh, this means that he might have to call Winry (or worse, GO to Winry! eep!) to fix it which means that Al will know something's wrong with Ed so he'll be coming back to help Ed and he'll want to know what Ed was doing to cause it to break! *grins* Ed may end up telling Al about him being with Roy before he really wants to! Things are definitely getting interesting!! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on July 05, 2007
    HI! I'm a bit ashamed to admit that it's been almost a month since I last reviewed and I've only managaed to read up to chapter 8. It is by no means because your story isn't good because it is one of the best here! Love the smex!! I'm just a slow reader with little spare time on her hands. *cries* I just wanted to offer a few words of encouragement so you will know that at least someone thoroughly enjoys your stories! YAY!! These last two chapters I read (7 and 8) were unbelieveably hot! Ed and Roy both have an amazing amount of stamina to do it as many times in a row as they have and still be up for more! wow! The bondage was great! The dog collar was the perfect little accessory for their games! They are Dogs of the Military after all!! XD You've got my curiosity piqued with this ginger root thing. The produce section of the grocery store has taken on a whole new meaning for me! LOL! Wax play scares me. Having a fear of fire like I do, I don't think I could handle having a lit candle on me. I'm still anxious to know how Al will react when he comes back and finds out that Ed is with Roy!! :D exciting!!
    Update soon! pwease? "Where He Belongs" too pwease? :)
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From milky on June 09, 2007
    I have to sleep so I can't catch up right now, but I just wanted to let you know this is a fantastically sexy rp fic :)
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 08, 2007
    I.LOVE.THIS.STORY!!! :D I've only made it to chapter 3 so far but I'm loving every minute of it! It just gets better and better with each new chapter! I've never seen Ed portrayed like this, so dominant and wanton! Love it! From Ed wanting to know the "real Roy Mustang" (yummy!) to having sex in the shower (w00t!) to the little D&S bondage scene (very nice! Having sex on a hard chair isn't my thing but the domination thing works for me! :D), it's been one helluva ride! :D Ed may be completely new to sex but he knows what he wants and isn't afraid to go for it! Ed has an obivous fetish for wanting his colonel to be at his mercy. He really got off on Roy being defenseless in the shower ("Water douses flame...so you’re pretty harmless in the shower, like a kitten.") and tied up in that kitchen chair ("Feeling a little trapped lover?"). Yep, Ed is definitely kinky! so smexy! XD I really liked Ed's idea of using the fire alchemy book as an excuse to see Roy but I can't help but wonder how long that cover can possibly last. Even if nobody else notices, I'm sure Riza will. She sees everything! And what about when Al comes back? OOOOH! I can't wait to read more!! so exciting! :)
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 07, 2007
    Hey Look! I found the missing part of Where He Belongs chapter 6! It found it's way over to Pyrometallon as chapter 11! Well, at least I know where the missing chapter went! LOL! I'll leave a real review for Pyrometallon later. I promise! ;)
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From SadlerGirl on June 07, 2007
    I have a quick question, isn't this "Where he Belongs"?
    I love both stories , was pretty sure his was that.

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