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Reviews for Primal

By : CrimsonTide
  • From mjmusiclover on March 11, 2011
    ahh crazy horny goku is love, very beautifully done :D
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  • From DevilWoman on November 24, 2009
    you know I;m gonna married you XD (don't worry I always said that when I'm too happy) I love this wild sex ...wait, let me clean my nosebleed XD
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  • From Kistia on August 15, 2009
    I loved this! It was written well ^^
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 07, 2008
    Oh that last paragraph was just divine =)

    I certainly can't resist the Prince...
    Which means I can't resist your fantastic fanfics when it comes to him! =D
    Ever think about switching the idea and making Vegeta the uke?
    I'd love to see what your take on it would be =)
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  • From arkeshaa on May 24, 2008
    Awwww, I love that story n_n

    I wish it wasn't a one shot ^.^ lol
    Anywho, loved it!
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  • From Aresy on October 06, 2007
    “Vegeta?! Where are your clothes?! Where are my clothes?! Where are we?! Why do I hurt in private places?!”
    LOL, that was brilliant. I really enjoyed myself, this was a Interesting and satisfying one-shot. I love when authors address this part of the Saiyan race. Looking forward to more of your fanfics.

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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on June 10, 2007
    whoop! oh that was so GREAT!!! ^^ verrrrrrrry good job!!!! :D it was hot, sexy and funny!
    i think it´s not easy to write a one shot. but you´ve done a great job with this one!!! ^^ whoa, and i had to laugh a few minutes, about this "where are my clothes, where are your clothes,where are we...why do i feel pain in private places ..." sentence XDD ! so awesome! ^_______^ i really love to be "hit" unexpected by humor!!! sooo. please, keep on your work. i just enjoy it! bye ^^
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  • From ANON - kerry on June 06, 2007
    hi there i just wanted to tell u that i think you are an absolutely brilliant writer, i luv all the stories that you have got so far and i cant wait till that wonderful mind of your creates more!! if you have a homepage i would luv to know it so i can add it to my favourites and have a poke around :)
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  • From ANON - Vegetachik7 on June 06, 2007
    NICE! I'm not even a fan of Vegeta as the dominant seme, but this was great! And I love how...in character they were. Well...how in character Goku was after he came out of his lusty trance, heehee. And Vegeta knew exactly what he was doing. Again, very nice. i loved it.
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  • From Robyn on June 05, 2007
    This was a pleasure to read. :D V/G first times are so much fun!
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