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Reviews for Try Again.

By : CrimsonTide
  • From darkstar7789 on January 22, 2012
    Oh my gosh! That was so heart-warming and adorable. I kept cooing at the computer screen which made me look more crazy than usual! I hope you continue the fic! I really can't wait to find out the rest. Aww, Kakarotto Geta Prince. Wow, that's a mouthful. Really hope you're going to keep on with the fic! But if not, I can't really do much else but enjoy what I can. :) *hugs, cake, and brownies*
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  • From ANON - cuzicouldyay on October 26, 2011
    Eeeeeee, Kakuto!
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  • From mjmusiclover on March 11, 2011
    ahh incredible this is :D:D, i really loved this fic :D, i think i want on a rampage with your fics :D
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  • From ANON - Diana on January 06, 2009
    i really love your fic,i read it,like 5 times just hoping that you update it,well i hope you do it soon.
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 08, 2008
    Aaaaaaaaaawwwwww ^_^
    That ended really sweetly.
    A B.I.G contrast to IYD pregnancy.
    I always knew there was something about Yamcha I just didn't like...^_^'
    Well done, even though its an old fic. Still liked it =)
    I'm beginning to think you can do no wrong ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2008
    OH MAN I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THIS CHAPTER. When I remembered I still had one more chapter I could read, I rushed to this story so fast that my computer could barely keep up! I loved it though. The birthing scene was both funny and terrifying. I thought you were going to kill Goku off. In which case you'd be getting a visit from a certain someone. And no, it's not me *coughs and points to Vegeta standing in a dark corner*

    Anyway, I loved the end. It was so cute how everyone was trying to think of names. And I always wondered about the underwear names too. I feel sorry for that family. Fruit of the Loom would've been a very unfortunate name. Though one time I heard of someone naming their kid Toola Does the Hula in Hawaii. Now THAT is an unfortunate name, but completely off topic. >.>

    I like the name you chose though. And...Vegeta doesn't actually have a surname does he? I suppose Prince is fitting ^^ And I like that Goku and Goten took on the name as well. I never liked that their surnames were Son. "Yes, that is Son's son, Son Goten" Oh man, how confusing. Haha. Anyway, I've rambled enough. Great chapter! I hope you update some day. And when you do, I'll be the first one there.


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2008
    Chapter Nine was a sweet one. I felt bad for Goku being so bored. You'd think Saiyans would be built to fight while pregnant. Also I was a bit shocked by what Vegeta said. How could this POSSIBLY be Goku's fault? But I'm glad that they patched things up in the end. That lovey-dovey scene was so cute. For an extremely arrogant, proud and self-serving man, Vegeta sure can string together a few romantic words, can't he?

    Short chapter but I still liked it none-the-less. Can't wait to read the next, but I gotta go for now!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2008
    Chapter Eight was funny. Goku's attempts to keep Vegeta from finding out were hilarious, Vegeta's reactions had me gasping for breath and I had to sympathize with poor Bulma. I would NOT want that going on in MY house. I'm glad that Goku didn't let Vegeta kill Yamcha. Never really enjoy stories when people get killed, even if they might deserve it :P But I'm sooo glad he let him give him another black eye. And the total lack of concern when the blood was coming out of Yamcha's ears was funny.

    However, ChiChi ruined the mood of the chapter. I mean, what the hell? What right does she have to go up to someone she no longer has any claim over and tell him he needs to have an abortion? That woman sometimes.

    Anyway, great chapter! I wish I didn't have to read this story at such a slow pace. Until next time!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2008
    Chapter seven was rather funny. Vegeta was a jerk at the beginning but I can just imagine his face when he walks in and sees Bulma poking Goku's stomach. Also, the overuse of exclamation and question marks was hilarious. Usually that annoys the heck out of me since it isn't proper grammar, but in this it was quite funny. I was imagining all those punctuation marks hovering around their heads as they sometimes do in the anime.

    And Vegeta's last line just had be rolling on the floor. ^^ Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2008
    Wow so Goku's pregnant. This is interesting. I felt so proud of Goku when he punched Yamcha. I was more hoping that Vegeta would, I dunno, blow up his house or something but I'm glad Goku stood up for himself. That was great!

    Still loving the story. It's very interesting and well written! I don't get much time for the computer but when I do, I spend most of the time reading your stories! They're awesome! Can't wait to finish this one. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2008
    A good start to what will be a good story. ChiChi is awful so far. And I can't believe Yamcha did that. All Goku needed was a friend but instead he got a monster. This is horrible. Great job so far. I'm off to read the rest!
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  • From ANON - Saya on July 06, 2008
    You are getting me addicted to this fics.
    Will there be soon the new chapter? I hope so
    You totaly rule!
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  • From inumoon3 on December 13, 2007
    Cute fic! Can't wait for the update...but I think the family should be more involved in the story! More so their kids prior to their relationship...I think it would be cute for Goku and Vegeta to spend time with their new son and their elder sons as well. Oh and I was wondering is Bra apart of the story?
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 07, 2007
    I like your work 'cause it's easy to re-read
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - Katonie on November 30, 2007
    ooohhhhhhhhh. That is SO CUTE!!! Huggin' his tail in his sleep. aaaawwwwww...
    anyway, I love your story and please update again soon!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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